Examine Each Word
“The point blank of our firelocks,when attention
is paid to the loading, is known to be about 300 yards”
Lewis Lochee Elements of Field Fortification
examine each word
within musket-shot of shore
point-blank as you aim
over the placid waters
aim for sweet spot not the throat
11/18/2019
Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2019
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