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“The point blank of our firelocks,when attention is paid to the loading, is known to be about 300 yards” Lewis Lochee Elements of Field Fortification examine each word within musket-shot of shore point-blank as you aim over the placid waters aim for sweet spot not the throat 11/18/2019

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Date: 11/23/2019 11:09:00 PM
Just love your tankas, Kim. Excellent penning; excellent point! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/24/2019 7:04:00 AM
Thanks so much! Hugs...Kim
Date: 11/20/2019 6:38:00 AM
Indeed ... 'tis the heart our words should rend ... with sweet ferocity and deadly passion. I love this, Kim - wonderful! :o) <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/20/2019 7:06:00 AM
Thanks so much, Greg!
Date: 11/19/2019 1:05:00 AM
Woahh what an extraordinary sublime poem. Kudos.!! Pls pleez do comment/ review my newest poem too.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/20/2019 7:05:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 11/18/2019 3:30:00 PM
what a great metaphor, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2019 5:51:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 11/18/2019 2:52:00 PM
"not the throat" - wise advice, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2019 5:51:00 PM
LOL...right?!
Date: 11/18/2019 12:30:00 PM
Very clever...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2019 5:50:00 PM
Thank you, dear poet! :)
Date: 11/18/2019 11:31:00 AM
Hi Kim. Thanks for this luster. Have a great day
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2019 5:19:00 PM
Your welcome!
Date: 11/18/2019 8:23:00 AM
Kind of dark but definitely worth reading each word.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2019 5:18:00 PM
Thank you, Chris!
Date: 11/18/2019 7:43:00 AM
Placid waters where war is imminent...An intriguing write Kim..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2019 5:18:00 PM
Thank you, Joe!

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