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Exact Sounds But Different Ii

Higher power
Hire power

Lost jobs
Job lost

Feet stink
Stinking feats

Their strength
Strong there

Here dogs
Dogs hear

High wave
Wave Hi!

confusioni do not know?

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Nette Onclaud

January 30, 2011 at 12:06 PM

such a clever, winsome wrote, doris... i'm sooo liking all these... hmm, how about banana split/ split banana.. lol.. having fun here with you! :) huggs, nette

Gert W. Knop

January 30, 2011 at 7:55 AM

Well written, Doris! Enjoyed reall the read as well as part I of your poem!....All the best!...Love, Gert

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

January 29, 2011 at 10:58 AM

poetic renovation done here, how i wish it has a form so i can learn from your form. my poem that got you thinking is about the things we feel we can not do without but are actually deceptive....it causes hindrance and makes us stagnant. thanks for your very best concern. love, lightning ink.