Ex Ruben O

Said you'd make it through,
But you didn't stand a chance:
Now his name is ex.


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For My friend Ruben
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Duncan Avatar
April 21, 2013 at 2:03 AM
nicely done ;}
Chircop Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 11:51 PM
So much to.ponder about in this senryu Raul .Still pondering..It definitely gives the Aha!feeling..that s what senryu and haiku.is usually about..
Moreno Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 12:45 AM
It's more of an inside joke for me and Ruben. It was just for fun.
Dietrich Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 9:03 PM
This is kind of funny even though you might be referring to something I don't have a clue about. It's marvelous to hear from you again, Raul. IT's been ages since I saw you here and I sure hope you here again for a long stay??
Moreno Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 12:47 AM
Ruben lost a bet and changed his name. I was just messing around. Thanks, it's nice to be back and see how the soup has evolved in my absence.
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