Ex Ruben O

Said you'd make it through, But you didn't stand a chance: Now his name is ex. ------------------------- For My friend Ruben

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 4/21/2013 2:03:00 AM

nicely done ;}

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/5/2013 11:51:00 PM

So much to.ponder about in this senryu Raul .Still pondering..It definitely gives the Aha!feeling..that s what senryu and haiku.is usually about..

Raul Moreno
Date: 3/6/2013 12:45:00 AM

It's more of an inside joke for me and Ruben. It was just for fun.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/5/2013 9:03:00 PM

This is kind of funny even though you might be referring to something I don't have a clue about. It's marvelous to hear from you again, Raul. IT's been ages since I saw you here and I sure hope you here again for a long stay??

Raul Moreno
Date: 3/6/2013 12:47:00 AM

Ruben lost a bet and changed his name. I was just messing around. Thanks, it's nice to be back and see how the soup has evolved in my absence.