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Ex just called

So my ex-wife just called I simply got mauled For even after three years It is me she still smears I know this of coarse And say it without remorse She is a loon A stonecold buffoon Even after the divorce There is no remorse Only bitterness and hate In which I do not legate Why can't we just be genteel It would make much more of an appeal Why can't we just talk No, she just reeks havoc She brings on the stress Into the past she does regress When I snap her into the present All she does is resent Let us not look at the past For that we have surpassed Let us look to the future Like a new venture With some nurture and culture Would be the perfect mixture

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 1/29/2011 5:16:00 PM
Happy I never got married!!! LOL Christine
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Date: 1/29/2011 4:31:00 PM
Re Wrote second line from "And I knew I was about to get mauled"
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Date: 1/28/2011 7:18:00 PM
enjoyed reading your work....
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Date: 1/28/2011 1:31:00 PM
Nice rhyme and rythm with quite funny write to please the wife, Robert
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Date: 1/28/2011 8:50:00 AM
much better
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Date: 1/28/2011 8:25:00 AM
I realize I did that and agree with you. I am working on that
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Date: 1/28/2011 8:23:00 AM
rhyme is good, but when you changed in the middle from talking about her to talking to her it took away from it, would have been better if you stuck to one or the other , but the message contained and the flow and rhyming are good
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