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'evolving'

just a smile, then a hello our first rendezvous that night talking for hours like old friends magic in progress
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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August 22, 2011 at 5:15 PM
Such an amazing picture of first looks ... shocking Nikko hasn't jumped all over this one lol..... I love this Wilma, kinda like us bumping into each other on the Cape Town Beach, figure thats safer then the streets with all that cab trouble you have there..lol Love the picture you sent , it is now my wallpaper...with love from me to you Michael
Ball Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 2:00 AM
I really like this one too. Sort of like love at first sight. Nice job. God Bless, JB
Wesley Avatar
August 21, 2011 at 6:26 PM
Wilma, that's what has happened to me in the last few weeks. Your verse brings on the magic!
Dietrich Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 11:38 AM
What a sweet dodoitsu. It's great to see you this weekend, Wilma!
M V Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 10:38 AM
How nice and sweet it is!
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 12:52 AM
very romantic write I like the magic in progress...with love...old Jack
Mehta Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 11:19 PM
ice visual of passions, Nolene
Peranteau Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 11:07 PM
Very candle-light romantic dear poet, soft, and flexible ! Great picture ! I enjoy soft writes like this ! Have a wonderful weekend....much love, james
Poet Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 3:30 PM
Must be a wonderful person.So rare these days!very nice poem Wilma.Enjoyed your comments at my Tyburn page. Those nights are needed sometimes to start afresh...LOL:)
Mantle Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 3:10 PM
Great Dodoitsu. When it happens this way it is magic! Well penned. Best wishes Em :)
Onclaud Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 3:06 PM
enjoyed the image of soul boding here,wilms... so enchanting! :) huggs, nette
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August 19, 2011 at 3:05 PM
Isn't it wonderful when you meet someone and have an instant connection that allows you to talk for hours? This is a rare find and if you have found it, I hope your relationship keeps "evolving," Wilma. (I fear I've been de-volving LOL) Thanks for your comments on the toad ode. I had fun recounting that true story. Love, Carolyn
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August 19, 2011 at 3:04 PM
and the magic continues Nolene/Wilma.. such a beautiful name change.. where did this come from my friend? poetry awesome as ever .. so true..so real.. so magical..luv..
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