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Evolution Not Revolution

Our unfortunate world is constantly changing our need to become better through evolution a thirst a hunger for useless rearranging destruction, inevitable revolution, insecurities, need for a better future desperation directs our confused thought patterns abuser replaces another abuser so complacency shows goodness to evil turns. peace on Earth won't be achieved through revolution by reading animal farm I came to this conclusion. 2/5/2018 Contest life lesson from a favourite novel Sponsored by Line Gauthier.

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Date: 2/22/2018 11:34:00 AM
A great poem based on a great book, Roy. Congratulations on your First Place win in the contest. Sandra
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Roy Pett
Date: 2/22/2018 11:47:00 AM
Thank you for your congratulations and very kind comment Sandra really appreciated. :))
Date: 2/21/2018 1:23:00 AM
Nicely done , Roy, enjoyed reading..congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve~`*
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Roy Pett
Date: 2/22/2018 5:29:00 AM
Thank you for your congratulations Eve, so pleased you enjoyed this, thanks again for your support and encouragement. :))
Date: 2/20/2018 6:20:00 PM
congratulations on ur win Roy
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Roy Pett
Date: 2/22/2018 5:27:00 AM
Thank you very much for your congratulations Lewis, much appreciated. :))
Date: 2/20/2018 5:12:00 PM
Thanks for submitting this whimsical piece in my contest, Roy. There are all kinds of lessons in life. Well done.
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Roy Pett
Date: 2/22/2018 5:26:00 AM
Thank you for my placement in your contest Line, This has certainly gave me a boost after my short illness ( nothing serious) thanks again for your support and encouragement. :))
Date: 2/20/2018 2:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Roy. Tom.
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Roy Pett
Date: 2/22/2018 5:21:00 AM
Thank you for your congratulations Tom, really appreciated. :))
Date: 2/6/2018 10:33:00 PM
Yes, it was a great book with many lessons to be learned and it appears you learned well...very good, Roy, and GL in the contest.
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Roy Pett
Date: 2/7/2018 6:02:00 AM
Thank you for your very kind comment Carole, I would like to think that I learned something about human behaviour, thanks again for your best wishes much appreciated. :))
Date: 2/5/2018 11:11:00 PM
A great verse Roy and a great book you chose to do it. Good luck in the contest. Regards Tom.
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Roy Pett
Date: 2/6/2018 6:02:00 AM
Thanks Tom, I really appreciate your very kind comment and best wishes. :))
Date: 2/5/2018 2:36:00 PM
You chose a brilliant book to inspire your poem Roy - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Roy Pett
Date: 2/5/2018 2:52:00 PM
Thank you Jan, I had to choose this book as it’s the only book that I have read cover to cover and it took me three weeks due to my dyslexia, hope I have done it justice, thanks again for your support and encouragement I really appreciate it. :))

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