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Evolution

EVOLUTION
Dawn peeped at nature Adorning herself in purity And opened her eyes To birds hymning praises As the dew And the mist Gathered to exchange secrets About the breeze As it blew across The surface of the land, Then the autumn leaf Was separated from the tree And was lifted By the breeze High Over the hills To rest Upon the shore And the surf The emissary Of the vast ocean Washed it Out to sea.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/26/2015 12:19:00 AM
DAWOOD:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 6/30/2015 5:23:00 PM
Dawood, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/29/2015 11:42:00 PM
Good poem Dawood, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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