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Evisceratated 13

Eviscerated,
my offal,
donated transplants.

MagiCicada 13 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Maureen McGreavy

06/15/18

deathhow i feelfree verse

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Andrea Dietrich

June 24, 2018 at 12:23 PM

Let's hope it does not happen to you too soon though. This is very thoughtful one, Mick. Congrats on your win.

Mick Talbot

June 24, 2018 at 7:08 PM

I'll go with that, not knowing when is fine, but terminally ill and knowing soon, how brave is that? Thanks for the congratulations Andrea. Mick

Susan Gentry

June 24, 2018 at 9:40 AM

Congratulations on your win! :)

Mick Talbot

June 24, 2018 at 10:50 AM

Thank you, Susan. Mick

John Lawless

June 21, 2018 at 7:43 PM

This is not a haiku for the queasy.....a tribute to a lasting gift but ..... quite visceral

Mick Talbot

June 24, 2018 at 10:50 AM

I'm sure this is the second time I've been here? Regardless, thank, John! Mick

Line Gauthier

June 21, 2018 at 3:39 PM

That is quite the visual. Strong poem, Mick.

Mick Talbot

June 21, 2018 at 11:47 PM

Thanks, Line, waste not, want not, as they say. Mick

Paul Callus

June 21, 2018 at 8:41 AM

Donation of organs is to be lauded, Mick...so is your podium finish! Congratulations. Regards // paul

Mick Talbot

June 21, 2018 at 11:55 PM

Many thanks, Paul, On both counts, Mick

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

June 21, 2018 at 8:17 AM

Waste nothing, need nothing. Fabulous piece, played to my pragmatic disposition. Congratulations on your first place finish in my contest Mick! Thank you for your support, always, xomo!

Mick Talbot

June 22, 2018 at 12:03 AM

Yep, waste not, want not, my philosophy too. Thank you too, Maureen, for your support and my 1st place win, honoured and humbled. Mick