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Evisceratated 13

Eviscerated, my offal, donated transplants. MagiCicada 13 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Maureen McGreavy 06/15/18

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2018 12:23:00 PM

Let's hope it does not happen to you too soon though. This is very thoughtful one, Mick. Congrats on your win.

Mick Talbot
Date: 6/24/2018 7:08:00 PM

I'll go with that, not knowing when is fine, but terminally ill and knowing soon, how brave is that? Thanks for the congratulations Andrea. Mick

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/24/2018 9:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! :)

Mick Talbot
Date: 6/24/2018 10:50:00 AM

Thank you, Susan. Mick

John Lawless

Date: 6/21/2018 7:43:00 PM

This is not a haiku for the queasy.....a tribute to a lasting gift but ..... quite visceral

Mick Talbot
Date: 6/24/2018 10:50:00 AM

I'm sure this is the second time I've been here? Regardless, thank, John! Mick

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/21/2018 3:39:00 PM

That is quite the visual. Strong poem, Mick.

Mick Talbot
Date: 6/21/2018 11:47:00 PM

Thanks, Line, waste not, want not, as they say. Mick

Paul Callus

Date: 6/21/2018 8:41:00 AM

Donation of organs is to be lauded, Mick...so is your podium finish! Congratulations. Regards // paul

Mick Talbot
Date: 6/21/2018 11:55:00 PM

Many thanks, Paul, On both counts, Mick

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/21/2018 8:17:00 AM

Waste nothing, need nothing. Fabulous piece, played to my pragmatic disposition. Congratulations on your first place finish in my contest Mick! Thank you for your support, always, xomo!

Mick Talbot
Date: 6/22/2018 12:03:00 AM

Yep, waste not, want not, my philosophy too. Thank you too, Maureen, for your support and my 1st place win, honoured and humbled. Mick

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/21/2018 7:51:00 AM

EXCELLENT. Congrats, Mick! Janice

Mick Talbot
Date: 6/22/2018 12:03:00 AM

Thanks for your appreciation Janice, appreciated. Mick