Evil Looms

evil looms nearby
lurking in shadowed corners ~
shrill, the raven's caw

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Mark Koplin

January 15, 2021 at 5:36 AM

Congratulations on your win, Jenna!! That picture is going to give me nightmares. Did you know that the Raven is one of the smartest birds?

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 15, 2021 at 3:23 AM

- Back with congratulations, Jenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenna Logan

January 15, 2021 at 3:45 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise.

Line Gauthier

January 14, 2021 at 7:10 PM

Great senryu, Jenna. Some fall under the radar.

Jenna Logan

January 14, 2021 at 9:51 PM

Thank you, Line. I really appreciate that thought.

Jan Allison

January 14, 2021 at 3:01 PM

dropping back with my congrats Jenna:-) hugs jan xx

Jenna Logan

January 14, 2021 at 3:45 PM

Thanks, jan.

Tom Cunningham

January 14, 2021 at 2:38 PM

Back with congrats Jenna, Tom

Jenna Logan

January 14, 2021 at 2:42 PM

Thanks, Tom.

Andrea Dietrich

January 14, 2021 at 1:42 PM

Great imagery, Jenna. Congrats in the contest.

Jenna Logan

January 14, 2021 at 2:18 PM

Thank you

FJ Thomas

January 14, 2021 at 1:30 PM

Jenna you know placements aren't what's most important; but Tania did place you ;•)

FJ Thomas

January 14, 2021 at 2:59 PM

Exactly! And it can be hard judging a contest at times. Especially since we all have our unique tastes and preferences when it comes to poetry. I have far more NAs than placements with the poems I've entered into contests lolol.

Jenna Logan

January 14, 2021 at 2:18 PM

It's really not an issue. I write because I love poetry.

Tania Kitchin

January 14, 2021 at 11:51 AM

Jenna, congratulations on your winning placement with your spooky poem!

Jenna Logan

January 14, 2021 at 12:01 PM

FJ Thomas

January 14, 2021 at 7:58 AM

Same as John, the title caught my attention! I love a good title. Great contender Jenna!

Jenna Logan

January 14, 2021 at 12:29 PM

Thank you very much, FJ, but not chosen as a winner.

John Lawless

January 13, 2021 at 1:41 PM

Jenna, this title captured my muse's attention so I wrote a poem of the same title ... thanks for the inspiration.

Jenna Logan

January 13, 2021 at 1:44 PM

I am delighted that you did, John, and I left you a comment on your impressive lines.

Gershon Wolf

January 12, 2021 at 3:52 PM

Looks something like a 'Proud Boy' to me (at this point). ~ I see a line of cars and they're all painted black! ~ M. Jagger

Jenna Logan

January 13, 2021 at 3:59 AM

Associating evil with Proud Boy is about right (at this point) Thanks for the Jagger and comment.

Mark Koplin

January 12, 2021 at 12:06 PM

A raven is spot on for spooky. Well done!

Jenna Logan

January 13, 2021 at 3:58 AM

Thanks very much, Mark.

Arturo Michael

January 12, 2021 at 11:32 AM

Raven's caw report on the impending evil...Strong imagery here.

Jenna Logan

January 13, 2021 at 3:57 AM

Thanks for your insight, Arturo.

Victor Buhagiar

January 12, 2021 at 7:42 AM

This is perfect I love dark poems. Doubt if I could emulate you though. I'd give you a first placing. ~~

Jenna Logan

January 13, 2021 at 3:57 AM

I think you could write in any genre', Victor. Thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 12, 2021 at 6:12 AM

- Gives me chills, Jenna ... death and torment ... good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenna Logan

January 13, 2021 at 3:56 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise.

Regina Mcintosh

January 12, 2021 at 5:35 AM

Wow. Dark and foreboding – evil truly lurks in this vision you’re left on the page, whispering of darkness so thick it ripples with fear. Good one for the contest. God bless you always

Jenna Logan

January 13, 2021 at 3:56 AM

Thanks so much, Gina.