Evil Looms

evil looms nearby lurking in shadowed corners ~ shrill, the raven's caw

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Mark Koplin

Date: 1/15/2021 5:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Jenna!! That picture is going to give me nightmares. Did you know that the Raven is one of the smartest birds?

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/15/2021 3:23:00 AM

- Back with congratulations, Jenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenna Logan
Date: 1/15/2021 3:45:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise.

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/14/2021 7:10:00 PM

Great senryu, Jenna. Some fall under the radar.

Jenna Logan
Date: 1/14/2021 9:51:00 PM

Thank you, Line. I really appreciate that thought.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/14/2021 3:01:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats Jenna:-) hugs jan xx

Jenna Logan
Date: 1/14/2021 3:45:00 PM

Thanks, jan.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/14/2021 2:38:00 PM

Back with congrats Jenna, Tom

Jenna Logan
Date: 1/14/2021 2:42:00 PM

Thanks, Tom.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2021 1:42:00 PM

Great imagery, Jenna. Congrats in the contest.

Jenna Logan
Date: 1/14/2021 2:18:00 PM

Thank you

FJ Thomas

Date: 1/14/2021 1:30:00 PM

Jenna you know placements aren't what's most important; but Tania did place you ;•)

FJ Thomas
Date: 1/14/2021 2:59:00 PM

Exactly! And it can be hard judging a contest at times. Especially since we all have our unique tastes and preferences when it comes to poetry. I have far more NAs than placements with the poems I've entered into contests lolol.

Jenna Logan
Date: 1/14/2021 2:18:00 PM

It's really not an issue. I write because I love poetry.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/14/2021 11:51:00 AM

Jenna, congratulations on your winning placement with your spooky poem!

Jenna Logan
Date: 1/14/2021 12:01:00 PM

FJ Thomas

Date: 1/14/2021 7:58:00 AM

Same as John, the title caught my attention! I love a good title. Great contender Jenna!

Jenna Logan
Date: 1/14/2021 12:29:00 PM

Thank you very much, FJ, but not chosen as a winner.

John Lawless

Date: 1/13/2021 1:41:00 PM

Jenna, this title captured my muse's attention so I wrote a poem of the same title ... thanks for the inspiration.

Jenna Logan
Date: 1/13/2021 1:44:00 PM

I am delighted that you did, John, and I left you a comment on your impressive lines.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/12/2021 3:52:00 PM

Looks something like a 'Proud Boy' to me (at this point). ~ I see a line of cars and they're all painted black! ~ M. Jagger

Jenna Logan
Date: 1/13/2021 3:59:00 AM

Associating evil with Proud Boy is about right (at this point) Thanks for the Jagger and comment.

Mark Koplin

Date: 1/12/2021 12:06:00 PM

A raven is spot on for spooky. Well done!

Jenna Logan
Date: 1/13/2021 3:58:00 AM

Thanks very much, Mark.

Arturo Michael

Date: 1/12/2021 11:32:00 AM

Raven's caw report on the impending evil...Strong imagery here.

Jenna Logan
Date: 1/13/2021 3:57:00 AM

Thanks for your insight, Arturo.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/12/2021 7:42:00 AM

This is perfect I love dark poems. Doubt if I could emulate you though. I'd give you a first placing. ~~

Jenna Logan
Date: 1/13/2021 3:57:00 AM

I think you could write in any genre', Victor. Thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/12/2021 6:12:00 AM

- Gives me chills, Jenna ... death and torment ... good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenna Logan
Date: 1/13/2021 3:56:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 1/12/2021 5:35:00 AM

Wow. Dark and foreboding – evil truly lurks in this vision you’re left on the page, whispering of darkness so thick it ripples with fear. Good one for the contest. God bless you always

Jenna Logan
Date: 1/13/2021 3:56:00 AM

Thanks so much, Gina.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/12/2021 5:24:00 AM

Your senyru conjures up images of spooky graveyards and ravens watching with their beady eyes. Very Poe like Jenna, dark and forboding. Tom

Jenna Logan
Date: 1/13/2021 3:56:00 AM

"Poe like" is a great compliment, Tom. Thank you.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/12/2021 5:07:00 AM

I found the image and imagery chilling Jenna, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Jenna Logan
Date: 1/13/2021 3:55:00 AM

Thanks a lot, Jan.