Evidence

evidence
of an open heart
that bleeds across
the open sky like
a sunset that is so
alone her own beauty
she cannot know
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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December 30, 2016 at 9:14 AM
This is great. !
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December 30, 2016 at 10:19 AM
Thank you for taking time to read and comment Heidi. Have a great New Year. Forrest :)
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December 30, 2016 at 7:30 AM
This was sadly beautiful. I like how his feels to read.
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December 30, 2016 at 10:26 AM
Thanks for reading and sharing a comment. Have a wonderful New Year. Forrest
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December 30, 2016 at 4:29 AM
Surreal tinge in the poem is engaging .
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December 30, 2016 at 10:29 AM
Thank you Probir for taking time to read and comment. I'm getting quite a bit more familiarized with your work. Have a great New Year. Forrest
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December 30, 2016 at 3:54 AM
An "open heart that bleeds...like a sunset"~ very cool image Forrest.
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December 30, 2016 at 10:31 AM
Thank you for taking time share comment. Have a very happy New Year Phi. Forrrest
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