Everything Was Just Perfect As You Said

I lit up everything for you... the empty roads.. to the dark sky... the candle light.. to the broken lamps... nothing was remaining to be lovely... everything was just perfect...as you said... I planned and walked..to do all the above done... I guess I shouldn't have done that...unknowingly if I knew the outcome.... each step was supposed to be measured... none was to be having an error everything was to be just perfect as you said.. you changed me from a broken boy... to being a man... from a broken man... to a man with honour.... everything you did was just perfect as you said... I adopted all positive from you... though I dont mind taking negative... because its your eyes that drive me crazy... make my surroundings go hazy.. I wont take my eyes of you... because when hazy...you then made me go crazy and lazy... everything you were...was just perfect as you said... you were to sweet to me... at times a little diabetic.. I being naughty.. was just a little diabolic.... everything you did was just perfect as you said... "I then fell for you... I fell in love..." there you go I admit .... never felt this way before... I did know..that you and me cant be together..... then why did you do the above ???????? or simply put everything you did to break my heart was just perfect as you said...

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