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Everything a Boy Would Need

Father you are ev'rything a boy would need Strong and Patient, Distant but always ready never lost in emotion Like my Mum was Shame that I'm a girl

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Date: 12/1/2017 9:02:00 AM
Well done in so few words.
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Date: 1/29/2012 9:09:00 AM
Hi, this is a very powerful poem. Amazing you can pack so much truth and emotion into only four lines. Great work.
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Date: 1/25/2012 10:42:00 AM
I wish I had a better understanding on the forms of poetry so I could give you a clear confident comment on your writing Nick. I will tell you I do love reading poetry. I thank you for sharing yours today I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/25/2012 6:31:00 AM
Agree Nick,well done. oxox Anne-Lise
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