Everyone Is Part of a Whole

What's the fault of the children
Born from the undocumented parents
They have rights to be registered
Where they were born and live
The rights are not limited
Not even those who are documented
They are the citizens of the world

Why can't they be accommodated
Even simply for a birth certificate
What is important they become "legal"
Although there are no "illegal migrants"
What happen to the system
Let's "get everyone in the picture".
Because everyone is part of a whole!


The Palace Hotel, Kota Kinabalu
241115. 9:52AM

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/26/2016 6:04:00 PM
Neldy Jolo, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Neldy Jolo
Date: 2/27/2016 12:00:00 PM
Thanks much Linda.
Date: 1/30/2016 8:12:00 PM
Very well expressed. Best wishes, RP
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Neldy Jolo
Date: 2/27/2016 11:43:00 AM
thanks much RP...
Date: 1/30/2016 7:38:00 AM
I like how you wrote this.. I think it's amazing..
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Date: 2/27/2016 11:14:00 AM
Thanks much Lana. Appreciate it very much...
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