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Everyone Is Part of a Whole

What's the fault of the children Born from the undocumented parents They have rights to be registered Where they were born and live The rights are not limited Not even those who are documented They are the citizens of the world Why can't they be accommodated Even simply for a birth certificate What is important they become "legal" Although there are no "illegal migrants" What happen to the system Let's "get everyone in the picture". Because everyone is part of a whole! The Palace Hotel, Kota Kinabalu 241115. 9:52AM

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Date: 2/26/2016 6:04:00 PM
Neldy Jolo, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Neldy Jolo
Date: 2/27/2016 12:00:00 PM
Thanks much Linda.
Date: 1/30/2016 8:12:00 PM
Very well expressed. Best wishes, RP
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Neldy Jolo
Date: 2/27/2016 11:43:00 AM
thanks much RP...
Date: 1/30/2016 7:38:00 AM
I like how you wrote this.. I think it's amazing..
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Neldy Jolo
Date: 2/27/2016 11:14:00 AM
Thanks much Lana. Appreciate it very much...

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