Sotto Poet Poet Sonnet

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Everyone Has a Sense of Nature

Forests, meadows, and brooks evoke feeling.
They dwell in isolation and therefore live eternally.
It conveys delight to those whose words cannot be reaching.
They aren't dead, but they are all in mortify sturdily.

Is the evolution of green life destined for poor performance? 
And return in a floral arrangement that has been rejuvenated.
It's been there for millennia, and it's in the lap of grace. 
Erratically comes humming dragonfly white-faced.

the sun and moon will continue to exist in perpetuity
Innocence prevails under the surface when there is a mismatch 
It was spring since I first hear the crow's lullaby.
Occasionally, squirrels raid my broccoli patch. 

After that, the acute working bees act to work buzzing.
Gardening gives you peace and feeds you from lonesome feeling.


First place contest winner

Written: July 29, 2021


A Brian Strand Sonnet Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Beryl Edmonds August 3, 2021 at 3:04 PM Nature invites poets to write and you have written a beautiful sonnet here Lasaad. Congratulations on your first place win in Brian’s contest… Belle

Delice Arleen Skelly August 2, 2021 at 2:45 AM Well done Lasaad, congratulations on a win..Delice

Alexis Y. August 2, 2021 at 1:40 AM Hi Lasaad, I'm just coming back to say congrats on a well-deserved win:-) Alexis

Rama Balasubramanian July 31, 2021 at 7:01 AM Thanks for your mail. Learned something new. Now I too will write sonnets differently. When I read your wonderful write, I thought this should not get NA for small reasons. That's why I mailed you. Some sponsors are particular. Congratulations on your win Sotto Poet July 31, 2021 at 8:51 AM I really appreciate what you stated in your comment, Rama; some sponsors are pretty picky, and we can never predict how they would think throughout the assessment. Blessings, my good friend.

Mystic Rose Rose July 30, 2021 at 2:54 PM I find so much peace when I am in my garden too, so much to see so much to feel and write about Lasaad, You have written a lovely sonnet, good luck in the contest, be well :)

Rama Balasubramanian July 30, 2021 at 11:57 AM Awesome! Superb entry for contest. I agree with your last line as I love gardening. All the best for contest Sotto Poet July 30, 2021 at 12:11 PM Thank you, Rama; your kind words are so motivating, blessings and hugs.

Alexis Y. July 30, 2021 at 10:50 AM WoW! Lasaad, You have penned a stellar write for the contest theme. I echo what L. Milton said. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend, my friend:-) Alexis Sotto Poet July 30, 2021 at 10:58 AM I'm so glad that you like it, Alexis. Your sweet words are very motivating and uplifting. Thanks for your kindness, and best wishes to you. Blessings and warm hugs.

L Milton Hankins July 30, 2021 at 10:01 AM WOW - Incredibly fine writing, Lassad. I think this should be a POTD, also! Sotto Poet July 30, 2021 at 10:47 AM Thank you, Milton; your kind words are very motivating; I'm not sure about POTD, but it would be a wonderful honor if it is.

Delice Arleen Skelly July 30, 2021 at 7:46 AM Images of the natural world drive this poem, very nice Lasaad.... Sotto Poet July 30, 2021 at 10:50 AM Thank you, Delice; I appreciate your kind and uplifting words, have a great day. Blessings and best regards

Vijay Pandit July 30, 2021 at 5:51 AM Lovely sights and sounds of nature, Lasaad. All the best for the contest. Sotto Poet July 30, 2021 at 10:53 AM Thank you so much, Vijay. Your kind words are so uplifting and really appreciated. Blessings, my good friend

Victor Buhagiar July 30, 2021 at 12:53 AM A beautiful sense of nature., brilliant in concept. I'm sure you will get a high ranking in this contest. Sotto Poet July 30, 2021 at 10:55 AM Thank you so much, Victor; your valuable words shed more allure to my poem and are so much appreciated. Blessings, dear friend.