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"oh, I only said that for a joke" She said, undoubtedly embarrassed At my gratitude If course she did, How could she have come up with those words Randomly, Such a wonderful and beautiful compliment, So much better than mine, 'i love you 'cos you're great'. Carmen was too late, She couldn't retrieve it She'd sent it out to me, I had caught it, And sent it straight to you, So much more deserving of it Than I 'the world would be a better place If everyone was you ' She said To me But probably meaning you. Goodbye my love, My wonderful wife Wendy.

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Date: 3/3/2024 7:16:00 AM
To receive a compliment from Carmen and pass it on to another...What a playful poem.I like it.Keep on writing Joseph!
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Date: 2/15/2024 12:23:00 PM
Joseph, a beautifully written and heartfelt piece.
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Date: 2/14/2024 10:19:00 AM
Hello Joseph, A fekt pome. Enjoy your day my frikend. /Darlene/
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Date: 2/12/2024 6:59:00 PM
Very nice, thanks for sharing
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Joseph Healy
Date: 2/13/2024 3:10:00 PM
Go raibh maith agat Thank you In orish
Date: 11/28/2023 11:40:00 PM
I was suddenly sad for you reading this. What beautiful words to say to a loved one. Some people really make the world a better place :)
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Joseph Healy
Date: 2/13/2024 3:11:00 PM
I have not been on soup much. I appreciate your kindness

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