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Everyday Is Such a Trudge

Monday, our hearts were hefty with dread. Hoping postman fetches bucks for bread. It will cape with the psyche's desires well. Under a grasp, swirling, we felt the spell. Tuesday would alter prompts the shame. We may gaze at how they weave the tame. Critics condemn this real issues speed. A halcyon act can only atone for an evil deed. Wednesday is a day of wait, wilt, and fade. The days run crazy till buried and ruined. The note on the front door says no more. The homeless were not a packed store. Thursday's rain taunts those who work gleefully. Its fleeting pleasures continue to be costly. Firms show their devotion to their service. While sweat-soaked hands act as a safety device The Friday treatment is just ephemeral. The weekend issue covers the workday as well. No fish, no dish, no lush gems, no taste. A hoodlums exit is short and should haste. Saturday dream topic is a sweet relief. No one's ever won the lotto in alter his life. From a mindset of misery to one of saving. No quaint will be there by day's ending. Bill payment and relax are served on Sunday. Ignored and rigid to others, alike a decay People accept forgiveness with confidence. No apology or remorse for the appearance. Daily facts involve stress, sorrow, and deceit. All are outcomes that may arise in the present. It is fundamental to have a daily routine. As a particular version, no blooming is seen.
Written: August 1st, 2021 A Brian Strand Your Choice Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Merryman Avatar
August 5, 2021 at 12:08 PM
Lasaad, congrats on your win in Brian's contest with this thought provoking write! Blessings, Kim M
Poet Avatar
August 5, 2021 at 1:09 PM
Thank you so much, dear Kim, it's so nice of you. Blessings and kindest regards.
Agustin Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 9:41 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this wisdom-filled muse of yours; I'm delighted especially with the last two lines. God bless you.
Skelly Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 2:23 AM
Always cultivated a routine, downside it's frustrating if it's interrupted. nice one ..Delice
Y. Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 1:13 AM
WoW! Lasaad, You've penned such a well-written meaningful write. In my opinion, if one doesn't have a daily routine, life can be even more hectic. Good content and rhymes:-) Alexis
Buhagiar Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 12:48 AM
I have long constructed a routine for myself and I would feel annoyed if it is disturbed.
Hankins Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 1:58 PM
So true, Lasaad, but also true that "It is fundamental to have a daily routine." I enjoyed your poem.
Poet Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 2:12 PM
Thank you very much, Milton, and agree, even though we despise routines, we need them to survive, but they may be overpowering at times.
Pandit Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 1:24 PM
Every day brings new challenges full of joy and woes. Life is not easy. Very well said, Lasaad.
Poet Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 2:14 PM
Thank you very much, Vijay, and agree, even though we despise routines, we need them to survive, but they may be overpowering at times.
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