The Situation Poet Rhyme

Everyday

everyday i think of you
my love does you through and through
and when i turn to think of you
all emotions come into view
a sadness on my face is born
reliving the moment my heart was torn
and tears they still flood my eyes
the same as the moment i heard you died
but sadness is not the only thing
we had somethings that joy would bring
we had presents, cards and jealousy
so much we had, what did it mean
i still feel there can be no one else
and that God gave me you Himself
and somewhere out there on the otherside
beside the glory is my prize

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Elizabeth Wesley June 8, 2012 at 10:04 AM So you've experienced the bumps too! It's never easy but perhaps we learn somethingwhenit goes wrong. The Situation June 9, 2012 at 6:58 PM this bump is still bumping to this day.6/9/12

Maxeen Dennis February 3, 2012 at 9:26 PM Beautiful poem, but sorry its about loosing someone!

Debra Squyres January 12, 2012 at 5:13 PM Lovely sentiments...enjoyed !!

Phyllis Babcock January 12, 2012 at 7:28 AM Lovely emotional poem you have penned T.S. Thank you for your comment. love phyl

Brenda Victoria Northeast January 11, 2012 at 5:49 AM That is so heartfelt and very wonderful- love so ultimate, Bless you, Bren :

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer December 27, 2011 at 9:28 PM OHH Situation...I didn't mean to insult you-I am so sorry. I just asked b/c of your name...I thought you got it from the show (I deleted the other comment-very sorry).

Elizabeth Wesley December 26, 2011 at 7:12 PM So emotional, give the reader a feeling of sadness for the loss.

Poet Destroyer A December 24, 2011 at 8:52 PM A nice one... It's seems hard to let go... even when one has moved on...lovely... enjoy your holidays...p.d.

Sara Kendrick December 24, 2011 at 2:15 PM Enjoyed reading your work..Sad to loose someone that you love especially to loose them to death...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Red Fiery December 24, 2011 at 11:02 AM Ah ! the longing for love....an endless road...brilliant wrk...

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer December 24, 2011 at 8:13 AM Situation...Are you going to be writing more? I hope so! I guess you will be the one to have to decide if I'm 'good enough' to be edgy. I think I just may be. :) Looking forward to seeing more from you :) The Situation December 24, 2011 at 9:47 AM depends on the situation

M.I.A . December 23, 2011 at 7:25 PM a great piece! I can feel the longing here, beautiful

Black Eyed Susan December 22, 2011 at 8:39 PM that's a lovely thought! full of hope and inspiration. I hope you're right :)

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer December 22, 2011 at 7:29 PM TS-Fantastic write here. What is going on w/ Susan? Is she ok? Thanks much, Natalie

Harry Horsman December 22, 2011 at 6:23 AM such feeling and so profound, awesome. harry

Andrea Dietrich December 21, 2011 at 7:30 PM TS. This poem is very heartfelt and feels so sad to me. however, i have to tell you, I strongly believe that with all the people in this big world, there are many souls that you can find happiness with, not just one!! thanks for your comment today. Luv,Andrea

Robert Pettit December 21, 2011 at 2:03 PM In a way, this reminds me of "Honey" by Bobby Goldsboro. Good wording and rhyming here.

Carol Sunshine Brown December 21, 2011 at 11:20 AM I enjoyed reading your poetry today TS. Wishing you a New Year filled with inspiration and the best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol