Everybody a Winner In Life's Game

I have that wish in my heart many of you must have the same, a disease free healthy world forget all those cursed names. Many of you must have the same a dream of disease free world, forget all those cursed names let that joyful world unfurled. A dream of disease free world where people love to live, let that joyful world unfurled where everyone is ever active. Where people love to live children forget curse of pain, where everyone is ever active no disease to drive insane. Children forget curse of pain old age ceases to be a problem, no disease to drive insane everybody a winner in life's game. Old age ceases to be a problem a disease free healthy world, everybody a winner in life's game I have that wish in my heart. © kashinath karmakar (26th May,2011) ============================ By:kash poet
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Sweetheart Avatar
June 16, 2012 at 9:10 PM
congrats Kash on a fabulous won with an awesome title luv.. always super..
Brown Avatar
June 15, 2012 at 11:47 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s's "Outstanding Title" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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June 15, 2012 at 12:25 AM
Big congrats on your win KAsh
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June 14, 2012 at 6:49 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem!!!
Taylor Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 6:44 PM
Congrats, Kash. Excellent. Nice going. Kudos. Ralph
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June 14, 2012 at 5:37 PM
HI KASH, a wonderful congratulations with your outstanding direct poem, attached with a strong title. Can't wait for you join another one of MY contest. Take care! :-) PD
Brown Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 4:46 AM
Congratulations on your win in Kristen's contest Kashinath. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 4:40 AM
My Congratulations on the win in the contest, kashinath
Sweetheart Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 9:05 PM
Congrats Kash on your wonderful win with this perfect entry my friend ..enjoy luv..
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June 2, 2011 at 6:51 PM
CONGRATULATIONS!!! For this great big win,..well-deserved for the wonderful piece!!! thumbs up.. ***jun-jun
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May 29, 2011 at 12:15 PM
Kashinath, Nice meeting you in poetry soup. Love and enjoyed your poem. Nice thoughts on a decease-free world! Good luck! Thank you for reading my poems. Dalila
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May 27, 2011 at 1:40 PM
mucho thankxx Kash for your observant eye my friend.. telling u this darn spell check ..spell checks not all that luv.. so appreciate my friend.. kudos to u luv..
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May 27, 2011 at 10:30 AM
i can't think of a better wish than that. a wonderful piece you wrote here, can tell this one is straight from the heart. thank you for Commenting on Rain Drops Making love.
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May 27, 2011 at 3:24 AM
Many do have the same wish. If only wishes could come true. Well done. Good luck in the contest. Steve
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May 27, 2011 at 1:40 AM
missing your works... got more, kashi?? visit me?? :) huggs nette
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May 26, 2011 at 8:33 PM
Kash, this is a great POEM. Yes, a pantoum is a wonderful way to express one's poetic thoughts and this was a great way for you to show your wish for a healthy world. Very clever. Wish I had thought of it!
Mehta Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 6:11 PM
A nice refrain everybody a winner in life, game, nice flow of expression, kashinath
Sweetheart Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 1:50 PM
a grand and elegant wish Kash and wish us all a healthy life ..achieved by a healthy lifestyle of course.. good luck in the contest with this beauty .. happy and safe holiday weekend luv..
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May 26, 2011 at 1:15 PM
Lovely wish, Kash. And a lovely write too : )
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May 26, 2011 at 12:56 PM
Good luck in the contest...Reads like winners' circle to me..Thanks for stopping by and giving a kind review of my work..Sara
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May 26, 2011 at 12:11 PM
Hi Kash, I'll be at sea, so there'll be no access to the internet for several days. Hoping to catch some great fish for dinner(s). Love, Carolyn
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May 26, 2011 at 11:54 AM
What a great wish to choose, Kash! Eliminating all disease would truly be a wish come true for many. You rock, dear! Winning wishes coming your way. Tomorrow night I leave for a fishing vacation and will be away for a week. Have a great time while I'm away. Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 11:33 AM
I am sitting here reading some very amazing poems today Kashinath. I am glad yours was among them. Have a wonderful day full of love and joy. Love, Carol
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May 26, 2011 at 10:17 AM
health is wealth, kashi... love the whole tonality of this shimmering piece.. a winner for sure! whooot! come visit..:) huggs, nette
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May 26, 2011 at 8:40 AM
Doctors on leave!
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