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If I write when sat on the toilet - is it poetry in motion? (Just asking for a friend!) 07/03/23

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Date: 7/9/2023 3:17:00 AM
LMAO
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/9/2023 7:46:00 AM
hahaha:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/8/2023 1:00:00 AM
Jan,concretely is a material poem, pum pun.. salute alkas
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Date: 7/8/2023 2:52:00 AM
lol thanks Alkas:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/4/2023 12:41:00 AM
Very clever, Jan:)
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Date: 7/4/2023 2:02:00 PM
thanks Jo xx
Date: 7/3/2023 11:12:00 PM
You are very funny Jan and clever …and it is poetry in motion!! Love it! Debx
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Date: 7/3/2023 11:39:00 PM
woohooo thanks Deb thanks for the confirmation lol. Hope you like the turd and fan pic lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/3/2023 4:05:00 PM
Jan, a great monoku, haha, hugs.
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Date: 7/3/2023 11:38:00 PM
thanks Andrea :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/3/2023 3:48:00 PM
haha. good one, Jan.
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Date: 7/3/2023 11:37:00 PM
thanks Andrea :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/3/2023 3:28:00 PM
Only if you consumed "food for thought"
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Date: 7/3/2023 11:37:00 PM
Good one lol thanks John :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/3/2023 10:59:00 AM
It depends on what had been served for dinner! Love it Jan!
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Date: 7/3/2023 11:37:00 PM
lol thanks Mike :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/3/2023 10:32:00 AM
Ahemmm… I’m going to make it clear that the friend you mention is not me. If I walked in on that scene I’d certainly be in motion to hurry and get outta there! Great job of knowing how to count syllables in a Monoku, Jan.
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/3/2023 11:36:00 PM
Maybe folk have too many syllabubs to count syllables
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/3/2023 10:46:00 AM
Lol thanks Lin. I have to say do have a note pad near the throne just in case I get inspired lol. I never know when inspiration hits x
Date: 7/3/2023 10:12:00 AM
Mind if I second that motion Jan, an absolutely brilliant Monoku, cheers David
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Date: 7/3/2023 10:30:00 AM
Aww thanks David. I know some don't appreciate my poopy poems but I will never stop trying to make people laugh. Hugs Jan x
Date: 7/3/2023 9:46:00 AM
- Yes, I would certainly believe so... take the time you need, Jan :))) - hugs
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Date: 7/3/2023 10:22:00 AM
I may be able to push a few more poems out lol. Hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/3/2023 9:38:00 AM
Could well be Jan.xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/3/2023 10:21:00 AM
Lol thanks John hugs Jan xx

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