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If I write when sat on the toilet - is it poetry in motion? (Just asking for a friend!) 07/03/23
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Horne Avatar
July 9, 2023 at 3:17 AM
LMAO
Allison Avatar
July 9, 2023 at 7:46 AM
hahaha:-) hugs Jan xx
Poetry Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 1:00 AM
Jan,concretely is a material poem, pum pun.. salute alkas
Allison Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 2:52 AM
lol thanks Alkas:-) hugs jan xx
Daniel Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 12:41 AM
Very clever, Jan:)
Allison Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 2:02 PM
thanks Jo xx
M  Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 11:12 PM
You are very funny Jan and clever …and it is poetry in motion!! Love it! Debx
Allison Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 11:39 PM
woohooo thanks Deb thanks for the confirmation lol. Hope you like the turd and fan pic lol:-) hugs jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 4:05 PM
Jan, a great monoku, haha, hugs.
Allison Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 11:38 PM
thanks Andrea :-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 3:48 PM
haha. good one, Jan.
Allison Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 11:37 PM
thanks Andrea :-) hugs Jan xx
Lawless Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 3:28 PM
Only if you consumed "food for thought"
Allison Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 11:37 PM
Good one lol thanks John :-) hugs Jan xx
Gentile Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 10:59 AM
It depends on what had been served for dinner! Love it Jan!
Allison Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 11:37 PM
lol thanks Mike :-) hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 10:32 AM
Ahemmm… I’m going to make it clear that the friend you mention is not me. If I walked in on that scene I’d certainly be in motion to hurry and get outta there! Great job of knowing how to count syllables in a Monoku, Jan.
Allison Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 11:36 PM
Maybe folk have too many syllabubs to count syllables
Allison Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 10:46 AM
Lol thanks Lin. I have to say do have a note pad near the throne just in case I get inspired lol. I never know when inspiration hits x
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July 3, 2023 at 10:12 AM
Mind if I second that motion Jan, an absolutely brilliant Monoku, cheers David
Allison Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 10:30 AM
Aww thanks David. I know some don't appreciate my poopy poems but I will never stop trying to make people laugh. Hugs Jan x
Andresen Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 9:46 AM
- Yes, I would certainly believe so... take the time you need, Jan :))) - hugs
Allison Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 10:22 AM
I may be able to push a few more poems out lol. Hugs Jan xx
Read Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 9:38 AM
Could well be Jan.xx
Allison Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 10:21 AM
Lol thanks John hugs Jan xx
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