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Every Ounce a Man

EVERY OUNCE A MAN Well, never climbed a mountain but you can count on me to catch you when you fall, after all, drank from the fountain, so, thanks to you I am every ounce a man. Made love at midnight, fell in love by two, in the middle of that sickness thought of all the things I didn’t do. Can’t rely on justice though I never robbed a bank, but you I thank I am every ounce a man. When I was younger, I had such a hunger for truth but now that I'm older all that I wish for is youth and the knowledge I’ve gained. Maybe you don’t want my autograph but at least I know who I am, I’m every ounce a man. Here comes the disclaimer; if I should offend, my scirpo I defend, I had no intention to imply a preference or apply any pressure to comply to some hetero-code, no bravado. Sum of experiences, part of the whole, no matter who you are, the weight of your soul, metrically speaking, twenty-one grams, every ounce a man. NOTES: This style is called a "scirpo" (Italian for twist or weave) and is characterized by the irregular rhyme scheme (which includes internal rhyming), irregular line lengths and each new stanza gains an extra line. Measuring just before and after death, Dr. McDougal weighed the human body and concluded that the soul weighs 21 grams, 3/4 of an ounce.

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Date: 12/2/2019 1:29:00 PM
What a lovely piece Phil. Love it. Very well written and captivating. Well done on this wonderful poem. :)
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Date: 10/28/2019 12:11:00 PM
Ah, the road less traveled reveals rarely seen beauty newly gazed. Such is the bejeweled sighting of your sparkling poetry, Phil. I marvel always at your poetic skill and grace. Great poem w/an interesting footnote. Take care, dear friend. Love and smiles and smiles of joy forever.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 10/29/2019 4:02:00 AM
Thanks Freddie, you are a gentleman and a scholar. Namaste.
Date: 1/25/2019 8:14:00 AM
Hello Phil, I like this style of the poem. It has a style I like. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 1/26/2019 4:00:00 AM
Thanks Darlene, this is the second version of this form (the other is If Poets Ruled The World). Stay safe and warm.

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