Eileen Manassian Poet Senryu

Every Move You Make

You follow footsteps
Seeing where I’ve been and gone
Needing to know more

I know you’re watching
My intuition is strong
Your presence lingers

Every move you make
I can see from a distance
Reciprocal dance

You will never find
The true answer to my psyche
Discard that label

I am who I am
My inner world unexplored
Admission price: LOVE


Eileen Manassian

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 19, 2014 at 11:43 AM Each string glows uniquely better..;) you keep me going..:) Eileen Manassian August 19, 2014 at 11:46 AM Olive...welcome, my dear. Glad to have you visit me! :) It's a pleasure. Hugs.

Bl Devnath August 16, 2014 at 2:03 PM Excellent poem, carries me back my golden age. The essence at the end is love, very nice. Lovely done, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl Eileen Manassian August 16, 2014 at 2:44 PM Love....yes. Thanks BL...Good to have you visiting again. Hope all is well with you.

Richard Lamoureux August 16, 2014 at 9:37 AM I am sure it is worth the currency! Good morning Eileen. Eileen Manassian August 16, 2014 at 2:43 PM You would say that, Richard. You are such a gentleman. Good evening, my dear. I hope you are well and happy.

Andrea Dietrich August 15, 2014 at 11:55 PM was it for the enlightenment contest? That one was so hard for me. I just did not even do it. I really like the last one the best as a senryu! Eileen Manassian August 16, 2014 at 2:43 PM I don't do contests, Andrea....This last one I entered...just floored me. I thought I'd do better than I did. That's it...no contests for me. I guess I'm not enlightened enough...

Andrea Dietrich August 15, 2014 at 11:52 PM Eileen. I see this as a free verse the way it's all linked and well constructed around the way for someone to draw closer to another. Well done!! Eileen Manassian August 16, 2014 at 2:42 PM I thought of it as a senryu string...but free verse works too. Thanks for visiting, Andrea.

Justin Bordner August 15, 2014 at 8:46 PM Love is the best gatekeeper, Tyler to the secret river of your heart. When love meets love, a new mind is born. This is fine competitive poetry. J.A.B. Eileen Manassian August 15, 2014 at 11:23 PM Thanks ever so much, Justin. The river is deep...and strong...and refreshing. It needs to be guarded...and guarded well. Thank you for your visits. They bring me joy.

Ct Duet August 15, 2014 at 8:42 PM Love them and I have a ticket to get in.....hugs Tim Eileen Manassian August 15, 2014 at 11:24 PM Better show me that ticket before you get admitted in. Thanks for the visit, Tim.

Ilene Bauer August 15, 2014 at 1:35 PM i like this one, eileen! the ending is perfect! Eileen Manassian August 15, 2014 at 3:45 PM Ilene...thanks, my dear. This goes both ways. We all are a little curious...and it's natural to want to find out more....but friendship is only granted when curiosity is a genuine desire to know someone more because we like what we see. Thanks for passing by...Hugs

Jslambert Mister Roboto August 15, 2014 at 12:01 PM working with very limited time this week's end, but letting you know we are still reading. Admission Price, Love=PRICELESS! d'make a great commercial! Eileen Manassian August 15, 2014 at 3:44 PM :) Thanks, JS. You are kind. Appreciate it.

Casarah Nance August 15, 2014 at 7:22 AM Cool, I like this :) Eileen Manassian August 15, 2014 at 8:40 AM Can you hear Sting singing in the background...I'll be watching you! Thanks for popping by.

Dr.Ram Mehta August 15, 2014 at 6:30 AM I like the last, and glad to know you, Eileen Eileen Manassian August 15, 2014 at 6:31 AM Thank you, Dr Ram. Not everyone is, I'm sure. That is life. Can't please everyone. So happy to receive this note from you. Bless you! Hugs