Every Last Man Jack

It's in our very nature to destroy,
a destiny we seem intent to bear;
annihilate the things that give us joy,
or worse, treat Mother Earth with laissez-faire.
The arrogance we humans have, I swear;
to think that we can gouge, take all we need,
not realise we make the planet bleed.
But like a cornered beast, it's fighting back;
and if we do not soon wake up, take heed
She will have us all, every last man jack!




Dizain Poetry Contest Poetry Contest; placed 1st
Sponsored by: Sotto Poet 
Date written: 3rd November 2022

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Dietrich Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 11:24 AM
YES. Way to go with your win, Terry. Congratulations
Miller Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 12:28 AM
Thank you, Andrea.
Canerdy Avatar
November 8, 2022 at 8:30 PM
A big CONGRATS, Terry, on your win with this expressive, realistic poem. God will hold us accountable! Janice
Miller Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 12:28 AM
Thank you, Janice.
Daniel Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 7:43 PM
A very meaningful poem with a great message, Terry, congratulations:)
Miller Avatar
November 7, 2022 at 12:17 AM
Thank you, Jo.
George Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 6:16 PM
Yes, Mother Earth is being exploited and tormented beyond repair. She can no more bear this callousness. Now she has turned on us. Unless we are careful, everyone will be wiped off from Earth's face.....! Such a dire warning ! Congratulations Terry on your great win!
Miller Avatar
November 7, 2022 at 12:17 AM
Thank you so much, Valsa
Alex Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 5:00 AM
"The arrogance we humans have" - True. Great an beautiful writing. Congratulations!
Miller Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 7:27 AM
Thank you so much
Kendrick Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 2:39 PM
A good topic upon which you have written your contest winning entry. Way to go. Congratulations on your work being on Sotto's winners' list. Sara
Miller Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 7:28 AM
Thank you Sara.
Poet Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 8:24 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful context win, Terry. You have composed such an excellent poem.
Miller Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 7:28 AM
Thank you so much for the high placement and for running the contest
Roper Avatar
November 4, 2022 at 9:07 AM
Yes, we need to treat our environment with gentleness. Good luck in the contest. Blessings
Miller Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 7:28 AM
Indeed Eve, thank you.
Dietrich Avatar
November 4, 2022 at 7:28 AM
Scary thought, but I can see it coming!! Good one!
Miller Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 7:29 AM
Thank you Andrea for passing by and your kind comment.
Volumes Avatar
November 4, 2022 at 6:18 AM
A stern approach but so true Terry. We have so little time to wake up. Your poem evoked fear of what could and will eventually will happen if men, women and children do not wake up to the damage done and work toward fixing it. An excellent poem Terry. Worthy of high acclaim.
Miller Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 7:30 AM
Hi Wendy, thank you so much for your comment and continued support my friend, Terry
Mccann Avatar
November 3, 2022 at 10:07 PM
Good luck in the contest, Terry! You are so right-right-right!! Elizabeth
Miller Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 7:30 AM
Hi Elizabeth, thank you for reading my poem and your kind remarks
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