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Every Father's smile is more brilliant than the sun that shines forever in the sky; Here on earth I've only had one father and as far as I can recall he was the most tender loving hearted man I ever met When I was small he lovingly guided me, sharing his wisdom, he helped me grow into the woman I am today; I realize that Fatherhood was a gift that was bestowed on me so I never took for granted his loving doting ways He was my first hero, the guardian of my hopes and dreams he always sheltered me from the outside world I thank God for the father I had growing up, for I lacked of nothing so when he died I pinned a gold angel on his lapel and accepted the fact that God, needed an angel to guard His lair Late at night when I cannot sleep I close me eyes and think of him, and suddenly, I feel him everywhere !

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Date: 6/14/2023 7:17:00 AM
this is pure loving poem, and thanksful for your father, we can feel the emotion of rememberings, enjoyed and was touched
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Date: 6/14/2023 12:49:00 AM
A stunning tribute to your father. It is gratifying to have such lovely memories.
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Date: 6/14/2023 4:12:00 AM
Thank you dear Victor, father's our amazing mine remains in my heart, long after he died, grateful to have you on site with me, :)
Date: 6/14/2023 12:34:00 AM
What an amazing tribute to your father, Vie!!
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Date: 6/14/2023 4:11:00 AM
Thank you Joanna he was such a nice man, gentle mannered and kind. He loved me very much. Thank you for commenting, hope your keeping well :)

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