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Every Dream Held You

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In every dream I dreamed 
I could see you
 
In every pleasure derived 
I could feel you
 
Every thought, plan, even hope 
for a brighter tomorrow 
held you, somehow
 
In everything good 
that happened or could 
I always imagined you there

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Chris Green Date: 10/9/2019 7:44:00 AM Absolutely enchanting. Your words are dream-like, soft and floating across the page. Login to Reply Hello There Date: 10/9/2019 12:39:00 PM Thank you so much, Chris ~ I wrote this some time ago, but never imagined it would be received as well as it has. I am so pleased :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/6/2019 8:17:00 PM this is smooth flowing and so beautiful. Love it! Login to Reply Hello There Date: 10/6/2019 9:33:00 PM Thank you so much, Andrea :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 10/6/2019 8:37:00 AM So beautiful are the sentiments in your verses of dream--excellent write, HT. Login to Reply Hello There Date: 10/6/2019 1:00:00 PM Thank you, Vijay ~ always pleased to receive feedback from you, my friend :)

Silent One Date: 10/6/2019 7:38:00 AM this is just lovely... romantic lines, you say so much in just a few words.. Login to Reply Hello There Date: 10/6/2019 12:58:00 PM Thank you very much, Silent One. I am so surprised and very pleased this little piece has gotten some great feedback :)

Line Gauthier Date: 10/6/2019 7:33:00 AM Hello there, lovely poem. Login to Reply Hello There Date: 10/6/2019 12:56:00 PM Thank you, Line :)

Caren Krutsinger Date: 10/6/2019 4:01:00 AM Oh, wow! I am loving this one! Login to Reply Hello There Date: 10/6/2019 12:55:00 PM I am so happy you to hear ~ Thank you very much, Caren :)

Regina Mcintosh Date: 10/6/2019 12:07:00 AM Beautifully expressed, dear friend. I love it. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina Login to Reply Hello There Date: 10/6/2019 12:54:00 PM Thank you so much, Gina :) hugs

Sandra Adams Date: 10/5/2019 11:36:00 PM such a beautiful poem, one can feel the longing through your words...love this :) hugs Login to Reply Hello There Date: 10/5/2019 11:40:00 PM Thank you, Sandra. I just took a chance posting this very simple piece ~ I'm so glad you liked it :) hugs