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Every Dream Held You

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In every dream I dreamed 
I could see you
 
In every pleasure derived 
I could feel you
 
Every thought, plan, even hope 
for a brighter tomorrow 
held you, somehow
 
In everything good 
that happened or could 
I always imagined you there

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Chris Green October 9, 2019 at 7:44 AM Absolutely enchanting. Your words are dream-like, soft and floating across the page. Hello There October 9, 2019 at 12:39 PM Thank you so much, Chris ~ I wrote this some time ago, but never imagined it would be received as well as it has. I am so pleased :)

Andrea Dietrich October 6, 2019 at 8:17 PM this is smooth flowing and so beautiful. Love it! Hello There October 6, 2019 at 9:33 PM Thank you so much, Andrea :)

Vijay Pandit October 6, 2019 at 8:37 AM So beautiful are the sentiments in your verses of dream--excellent write, HT. Hello There October 6, 2019 at 1:00 PM Thank you, Vijay ~ always pleased to receive feedback from you, my friend :)

Silent One October 6, 2019 at 7:38 AM this is just lovely... romantic lines, you say so much in just a few words.. Hello There October 6, 2019 at 12:58 PM Thank you very much, Silent One. I am so surprised and very pleased this little piece has gotten some great feedback :)

Line Gauthier October 6, 2019 at 7:33 AM Hello there, lovely poem. Hello There October 6, 2019 at 12:56 PM Thank you, Line :)

Caren Krutsinger October 6, 2019 at 4:01 AM Oh, wow! I am loving this one! Hello There October 6, 2019 at 12:55 PM I am so happy you to hear ~ Thank you very much, Caren :)

Regina Mcintosh October 6, 2019 at 12:07 AM Beautifully expressed, dear friend. I love it. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina Hello There October 6, 2019 at 12:54 PM Thank you so much, Gina :) hugs

Sandra Adams October 5, 2019 at 11:36 PM such a beautiful poem, one can feel the longing through your words...love this :) hugs Hello There October 5, 2019 at 11:40 PM Thank you, Sandra. I just took a chance posting this very simple piece ~ I'm so glad you liked it :) hugs