Jenna Logan Poet Free verse

Every Drawn Breath

You were my air
   in every drawn breath

      With each desperate gasp
          my pulse weakens




January 14, 2021
   20 Word Max-do it with feeling
      Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Regina Mcintosh January 19, 2021 at 12:20 PM Wow. How did I miss this gem? I love it. God bless you always Jenna Logan January 19, 2021 at 12:51 PM Thanks you, Gina.

Andrea Dietrich January 18, 2021 at 10:06 AM wow, I just love this one! Congrats Jenna Logan January 19, 2021 at 12:51 PM Thanks, Andrea.

Jan Allison January 16, 2021 at 12:52 PM Dropping back to say congrats on your win Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx Jenna Logan January 19, 2021 at 12:51 PM Thank you, Jan.

Mark Koplin January 16, 2021 at 12:50 PM beautiful! Jenna Logan January 19, 2021 at 12:51 PM Thanks, Mark.

John Gondolf January 15, 2021 at 10:02 AM I lot of emotion in a few short words, Jenna, nicely done. Good luck in the contest. Hugs. Jenna Logan January 19, 2021 at 12:50 PM Thanks so very much, John.

Victor Buhagiar January 14, 2021 at 9:48 AM Emotions galore. So romantic. ~~ Jenna Logan January 14, 2021 at 2:40 PM Thank you most kindly, Victor.

Jan Allison January 14, 2021 at 6:36 AM uch an emotion packed piece Jenna, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Jenna Logan January 14, 2021 at 2:39 PM It would've come from my heart a few years ago. Thanks very much for your kind comments, Jan. I spent longer hunting for an appropriate picture than writing this. lol

Tom Cunningham January 14, 2021 at 5:44 AM You managed to pack a lot of romantic emotion in so few words Jenna, well composed. Good luck in the contest. Tom Jenna Logan January 14, 2021 at 2:38 PM I tried to make my sadness visible in as few words as I could. Thanks ever so much, Tom.