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Every Drawn Breath

You were my air in every drawn breath With each desperate gasp my pulse weakens January 14, 2021 20 Word Max-do it with feeling Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 1/19/2021 12:20:00 PM

Wow. How did I miss this gem? I love it. God bless you always

Jenna Logan
Date: 1/19/2021 12:51:00 PM

Thanks you, Gina.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2021 10:06:00 AM

wow, I just love this one! Congrats

Jenna Logan
Date: 1/19/2021 12:51:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/16/2021 12:52:00 PM

Dropping back to say congrats on your win Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx

Jenna Logan
Date: 1/19/2021 12:51:00 PM

Thank you, Jan.

Mark Koplin

Date: 1/16/2021 12:50:00 PM

beautiful!

Jenna Logan
Date: 1/19/2021 12:51:00 PM

Thanks, Mark.

John Gondolf

Date: 1/15/2021 10:02:00 AM

I lot of emotion in a few short words, Jenna, nicely done. Good luck in the contest. Hugs.

Jenna Logan
Date: 1/19/2021 12:50:00 PM

Thanks so very much, John.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/14/2021 9:48:00 AM

Emotions galore. So romantic. ~~

Jenna Logan
Date: 1/14/2021 2:40:00 PM

Thank you most kindly, Victor.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/14/2021 6:36:00 AM

uch an emotion packed piece Jenna, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Jenna Logan
Date: 1/14/2021 2:39:00 PM

It would've come from my heart a few years ago. Thanks very much for your kind comments, Jan. I spent longer hunting for an appropriate picture than writing this. lol

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/14/2021 5:44:00 AM

You managed to pack a lot of romantic emotion in so few words Jenna, well composed. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Jenna Logan
Date: 1/14/2021 2:38:00 PM

I tried to make my sadness visible in as few words as I could. Thanks ever so much, Tom.