Every Dog Has Its Day

Yes, I was inurbane but not from family poor.
Of innumerable malignant deeds you were the doer!
You, urban man, on your knees you came with aim to flatter.
I was no girl capricious though stood in line the next suitor!
All charms you applied to have me towards you gravitate.
In no time you grabbed all my wealth like water to dissipate!
Perspicuous you were in making me, in face of others, the scapegoat.
Many to alienate me; your mocking mistresses, family members who gloat!
But you stupid and ungracious, you may not know this journey with you is transitory.
“Every dog has its day.” I’ve found my true love and soon he will end my sob story!


12/09/16 - 10 lines
Ten words Challenge by John Hamilton
1. ALIENATE 2. CAPRICIOUS 3. DISSIPATE 4. GRAVITATE 5.FLATTER 6. INURBANE 7. MALIGNANT 8.PERSPICUOUS 9. TRANSITORY 10. SCAPEGOAT 
Not more than 20 lines.
Judged 17/09/16 - Placed 7
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May Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 5:56 AM
Your knight in shining army saves the day!....Very nicely penned Sunita...Congrats on the win...
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 11:32 AM
A superb end to the story which does not always come true in most cases. Anyway there has to be always a savior in difficult situation! :D Thanks for the read Joseph. :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 3:27 PM
Big congrats to you, Sunita. Glad to see you won.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 11:30 AM
Thanks Andrea...it was much more pleasure writing and sharing on this site, it just makes my moods! Thanks for the nice words dear. :)
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 5:48 AM
Thanks to John Hamilton for the placement and congrats. Congrats to all the winners. I truly enjoyed the use of ten words! :) Sunita
Turner Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 12:11 PM
Great job, Sunita. These 10 words are very hard to use a poem but you have done extremely well. Good luck!
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 1:02 PM
Oh thanks Daniel, glad you're the first to comment. So encouraging! :D Appreciate much, Sunita
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