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Every Dawn

Somewhere nearly home
     
             dawn was gently breaking

       Just as the teardrops from 

     your heart were waking

       Driving the sunset way

       Towards a rising day

one day sets on another day's pain.

Written July 2000

Copyright © Virginia Waters | Year Posted 2018

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Susan Ashley Date: 7/13/2018 9:14:00 PM Soft and soulful expression of heartbreak. Beautiful poetry Virginia. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Login to Reply Virginia Waters Date: 7/14/2018 6:57:00 PM Thank you kindly Susan

Gershon Wolf Date: 7/9/2018 4:38:00 PM Back with heartfelt congrats on your win in the contest, Virginia! Best wishes, Gershon Login to Reply Virginia Waters Date: 7/9/2018 6:26:00 PM ty GW

Line Gauthier Date: 7/9/2018 2:32:00 PM Congrats on your win, Virginia. Well done. Login to Reply Virginia Waters Date: 7/9/2018 6:26:00 PM thank you Line - nice to get a spot

Jan Allison Date: 7/9/2018 3:54:00 AM absolutely gorgeous imagery Virginia:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Virginia Waters Date: 7/9/2018 6:25:00 PM guess pain digs it out!

Sunlite Wanter Date: 7/8/2018 1:04:00 PM Thank you for commenting on my poem! It caused me to discover you. This is beautiful. Login to Reply Virginia Waters Date: 7/9/2018 6:24:00 PM your very welcome and thank you

Gershon Wolf Date: 7/8/2018 1:27:00 AM My heart is aching … painfully beautiful poesy. ~ Gershon Login to Reply Virginia Waters Date: 7/9/2018 6:23:00 PM as mine was then -

Nette Onclaud Date: 7/7/2018 11:09:00 AM ohh, how soul-crushing is this lovely write, virg... grateful for your comment on my page... huggs Login to Reply Virginia Waters Date: 7/7/2018 7:05:00 PM thanks nette, unfortunately no time to read everything and everybody here - let alone comment. Such a big site - though awesome to know poetry is still so alive in this electronic world. Love always - V

Lyric Man Date: 7/7/2018 8:51:00 AM Virginia.. your soft rhymes pop in this lovely work!! Login to Reply Virginia Waters Date: 7/7/2018 7:03:00 PM smiles