Virginia Waters Poet Rhyme

Every Dawn

Somewhere nearly home
     
             dawn was gently breaking

       Just as the teardrops from 

     your heart were waking

       Driving the sunset way

       Towards a rising day

one day sets on another day's pain.

Written July 2000

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Susan Ashley July 13, 2018 at 9:14 PM Soft and soulful expression of heartbreak. Beautiful poetry Virginia. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Virginia Waters July 14, 2018 at 6:57 PM Thank you kindly Susan

Gershon Wolf July 9, 2018 at 4:38 PM Back with heartfelt congrats on your win in the contest, Virginia! Best wishes, Gershon Virginia Waters July 9, 2018 at 6:26 PM ty GW

Line Gauthier July 9, 2018 at 2:32 PM Congrats on your win, Virginia. Well done. Virginia Waters July 9, 2018 at 6:26 PM thank you Line - nice to get a spot

Jan Allison July 9, 2018 at 3:54 AM absolutely gorgeous imagery Virginia:-) hugs jan xx Virginia Waters July 9, 2018 at 6:25 PM guess pain digs it out!

Sunlite Wanter July 8, 2018 at 1:04 PM Thank you for commenting on my poem! It caused me to discover you. This is beautiful. Virginia Waters July 9, 2018 at 6:24 PM your very welcome and thank you

Gershon Wolf July 8, 2018 at 1:27 AM My heart is aching … painfully beautiful poesy. ~ Gershon Virginia Waters July 9, 2018 at 6:23 PM as mine was then -

Nette Onclaud July 7, 2018 at 11:09 AM ohh, how soul-crushing is this lovely write, virg... grateful for your comment on my page... huggs Virginia Waters July 7, 2018 at 7:05 PM thanks nette, unfortunately no time to read everything and everybody here - let alone comment. Such a big site - though awesome to know poetry is still so alive in this electronic world. Love always - V

Lyric Man July 7, 2018 at 8:51 AM Virginia.. your soft rhymes pop in this lovely work!! Virginia Waters July 7, 2018 at 7:03 PM smiles