Every Bone

Soothe the mind with troubles past,
pain and suffering that will not last.
Understanding simple facts,
relates your thoughts to heart attacks.

On the brink of chaos' siege,
this crippling pain drops me to my knees.
Take my soul, but leave my heart.
For its been severed from end to start.

Relieve the pressure from under my wings,
and let my eyes feel nature's breeze.
Slowing time, or timing slow.
Erratic emotions erect and show.

No more hiding beneath the soil,
beyond unsheathing this hellful toil.
Reflectively shown the sun will beam.
Above your sins, He's on your team.

So rise again but do not fall;
allow your fears to dissipate small.
For when this misery has left its home,
there will be life in every bone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 10/24/2009 4:19:00 PM
4th verse "shown" we think a bit alike try Chysalis Torn. Light & Love
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Date: 10/24/2009 6:26:00 AM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/23/2009 6:10:00 PM
Good, good indeed. I like that this poem turn optimistic and I agree with it. Yes, rise again... Very nice. Thank you for sharing. Caroline.
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