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(Entry for the A Valentine's Senryu Poetry Contest, sponsored by Tania Kitchin, submitted February 2, 2025 - Third Place)

she is my diamond with love lucent and lustrous ~ and everlasting

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/12/2025 7:13:00 PM

Sweet, Jim! Congrats!

Jim Healey
Date: 2/12/2025 7:15:00 PM

Thank you, Kim.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2025 10:00:00 PM

She is a stunner. Congratulations.

Jim Healey
Date: 2/12/2025 7:15:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 2/9/2025 12:53:00 PM

Jim, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet senryu.

Jim Healey
Date: 2/9/2025 1:16:00 PM

Thank you, Tania. I appreciate it.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/3/2025 11:36:00 AM

aww what a precious poem Jim:-) hugs jan xx

Jim Healey
Date: 2/4/2025 9:49:00 AM

Thank you, Jan. Cheers from Canada. J.

Lin Lane

Date: 2/3/2025 6:41:00 AM

Hi, Jim. Your Senryu is quite lovely.

Lin Lane
Date: 2/3/2025 8:46:00 AM

There is so much more I think about political strife in my country. Even though I don't listen to the news, so many ridiculous headlines pop up online, that it's impossible to ignore it. Everything he does and says should be deemed unbelievable, but no asinine thing he does surprises me. He has no morals, no concept of what it means to be a leader, but he's certainly leading America off the cliff into an abyss of turmoil. The lemmings who follow him are blind, deaf, and I'll stop short of finishing that thought.

Jim Healey
Date: 2/3/2025 7:38:00 AM

Thank you, Lin. (Btw, I've been reading your more politically charged poetry and comments. I, too, have written some poetry about your sad excuse of a potus, and there will be more to come now that our countries are, unbelievably, in a trade war. I always knew that it was risky to be America's enemy. Never thought until now that it was risky to be America's friend!) Take care. Jim

Deb M

Date: 2/3/2025 2:54:00 AM

Love declared in three short lines ....so simply said and very sweetly done Jim....lovely! Debx

Jim Healey
Date: 2/3/2025 7:29:00 AM

Thank you, Deb. (Just reading this now while enjoying a cuppa. What a nice start to my day!) Take care. J.