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Everlasting Echoes In My Mind

Under last propitious auspices of a half-moon sky swaying within lingering notes slipping slowly away tepid eyes gaze adrift misted over a still sea imagining two silhouettes dancing arm in arm across distant shores and distant memories. Gasps gentle gasps holding breaths in meaningful moments where faraway stars illuminate fantasy and gracefully glide on every breeze the notes of a rising tomorrow join hands with the keys from a fading yesterday forming everlasting echoes in my mind

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Date: 11/10/2016 11:09:00 AM
It's good to remember good times Tim.
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Date: 11/10/2016 9:54:00 AM
What everybody else said this is an amazing write. A Fav!
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Date: 11/8/2016 3:05:00 AM
It's a memory, fading perhaps, but with everlasting echoes. I love this image, thank you.
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Date: 11/7/2016 6:23:00 PM
A romantic heart is always illumined by the light of distant stars my friend, Tim! Excellent writing!
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Date: 11/7/2016 4:04:00 PM
Sad...nostalgic and beautiful ...So beautiful.
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Date: 11/7/2016 4:02:00 PM
wow, this is a really beautiful one, Tim. I am breathless!
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Date: 11/7/2016 1:50:00 PM
I agree, it is a very soft poem. Nice Tim.
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Date: 11/7/2016 1:46:00 PM
Oh wow, this was absolutely beautiful Tim. Such a soft and endearing poem.
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