Everlasting As Creation

The vast oceans looked small 
from the outer-space;
and they were as blue as our sky above!
The survivors of the Flood 
astonishingly watched...
the swift flight of a gentle dove,
lay an olive branch
in the palms of his trembling hands 
that greeted the first rainbow:
that was the promise that God made to Noah!

    
Everlasting as creation is the God
we should proclaim in our relentless faith;
He existed before this universe was void!
From the mud He created the first man,
and with his own breath he gave him life;
and when He realized he was alone...
from one of his ribs He made the first woman!
And they happily walked in a paradise, 
which knew neither pain or death;
how delightfully they lied down to rest!  


We can put the blame on the ruler of Hell, 
when we're overtaken by temptation and neglect  
godliness as our primary need 
and lose that privilege,which was intended
as a blessing; and like
our ancestors,we are easily deceived by the Devil:
displaying a false image that
can't make us powerful and wise! 


Everlasting as creation is the God
who still loves us endlessly; 
and sees the misery and unhappiness
of this faithless human-race
that has no unshakable trust...
refusing to carry the flaming torch,
and won't sing the warm praises of a hymn!  
We can't live so unruly and defiantly,
and expect to reap an abundant harvest;
let's seek out the true God of our existence! 
    
  
Copyright 2008 by Andrew Crisci
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Date: 6/13/2010 8:45:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/12/2010 11:20:00 AM
Hey! Congrats on having you wonderful poem being featured this week, keep your pens flowing with passion. You are such a great writer
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Date: 6/10/2010 9:15:00 AM
Beautifully written testament to your faith, Andrew and a very well-deserved selection to be featured this week at the Soup!! Congratulations!
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Date: 6/9/2010 11:48:00 AM
Many congrats on your well deserved featured piece this week.Rgds Janette
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Date: 6/8/2010 1:47:00 PM
Very nice Narrative Andrew.... Excellent and well worth the feature....:JP}
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Date: 6/7/2010 8:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poetry this week Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/6/2010 7:05:00 PM
Congrats Andrew on your featured poem this week on the Soup .. a wonderful choice to share with us all.. with luv..from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/6/2010 2:36:00 PM
Amen! What an inspirational poem. Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/30/2008 11:34:00 PM
Andrew - the way you laid out your poem and expressed how you feel is outstanding - wonderful job
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