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Your love is everlasting, we will be together again, let your burdens, fade away. For your waves of passion, is what, i am dying for. This is the path, i have chosen, my sacrifices, my promises, will my heart ever heal. You are my desire, my soul, is in your hands. As i breath, your lives breath, i behold the truth, your passion is my safety. Our time is immortal, and i see your face of love, i cannot, turn back time, or the words, that i said. Your love is everlasting, no regret, take my heart, as it all falls away, just remember, this love, is immortal.

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Date: 11/29/2011 8:51:00 PM
* "Returning Unto A Beauty I Just Love * My Dear Precious Sweet John * Immortal Love * As Truly Pure Love Should * Owww, Let Us Dream * Thank You * Glad You Enjoyed, 'Sweet Sublime' * Sweet Honey From The Vine * My Luv Always * Sarah." *
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Date: 11/6/2011 12:26:00 PM
John, to love this deep is to know heaven on earth. Breathtaking words make an amazing poem. soup mail
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Date: 11/6/2011 9:03:00 AM
* “Dreams Beyound This Moment Wherein All Falls Away * Unto A Love Which Transcends The Edge of Time * A Torch Lifted Amid Ones Heart That, Shall Never Die * These Flames * Absolutely Beautiful * My Dear Sweet John * Luv Always * Sarah.” *
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Date: 11/4/2011 6:42:00 PM
That immortal love you speak of shines all through your verse. Truly , it transcends earthly love any time. Lovely verse John.
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Date: 10/25/2011 3:55:00 AM
This poem reminds me of my family's religion. JDubya. J.W...Do you go to the K.H.?
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john aaron green
Date: 10/25/2011 7:13:00 AM
no way,,,, im a just a christian,,,i dont belong to anybody but jesus,,,
Date: 6/18/2011 6:25:00 AM
good morning John, and love is a precious gift should have forever in a safe keep box.... one can alwasy look back and feel the emotions that will alwasy give and take the reasons to remember,, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 6/14/2011 7:24:00 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning John. Please keep sharing your writing with us. I wish you much inspiration that you may continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/13/2011 8:18:00 PM
a stunning write John ..much fervor in every line .. depicting love everlasting.. special piece my friend..
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