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Evergreen Nights

on evergreen nights
merchants rake lush prairie tress...
a killing field 



Premiere haiku contest II: Anything Goe
Re-submitted 7/2/2017

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Andrea Dietrich

February 10, 2016 at 5:37 PM

Way to go, Nette!!! Congrats.

John Lawless

February 10, 2016 at 1:36 PM

Nette, like the way you worked the environmental impact of man into this Haiku.

Paul Callus

February 10, 2016 at 1:04 PM

Back with congratulations on your deserved podium win, Nette:) hugs // paul

Sandra Haight

February 10, 2016 at 8:24 AM

Congratulations, Nette, on your win! Nice Haiku interpretation. Hugs, Sandra

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

February 10, 2016 at 4:11 AM

How lovely nette... truly beautiful haiku.. congrats on big win!

Poet Destroyer A

February 10, 2016 at 12:10 AM

Nette, Congrats on your "Haiku 101" win. LINDA

Susan Gentry

February 9, 2016 at 11:47 PM

Congratulations on this win with this wonderful haiku!

Nathan D.

February 9, 2016 at 9:06 PM

nice

Andrea Dietrich

February 3, 2016 at 9:06 PM

that idea goes very well with the picture, Nette. I did not even think of that!!!

Naddy Zahari

February 3, 2016 at 5:51 PM

Love it !

David Mohn

February 3, 2016 at 9:40 AM

Wonderful interpretation of the scene Nette :)

Constance La France

February 2, 2016 at 10:20 PM

nette, beautiful, visual, awesome, an excellent haiku, I love it ~

Connie Marcum Wong

February 2, 2016 at 8:35 PM

Nette, Your poem is in perfect union with the picture. Insightful and beautiful! #7

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 2, 2016 at 1:53 PM

- A great haiku, Nette - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

February 2, 2016 at 1:36 PM

Very creative take on this visual, Nette! You draw attention to those who act abusively and in stealth. gl in the contest. hugs // paul

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 2, 2016 at 8:08 AM

These crimes will not remain unpunished by nature! Excellent Haiku, dear nette!

Judy Konos

February 2, 2016 at 6:03 AM

As could only be said by Nette Onclaud...wonderful enjoyed!

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