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Evergreen

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jade firs stood on grass-grown scene 
her slope swathed in verdant sheen
white frost came, a friend so dear
the woods remain, ever green

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/13/2025 4:06:00 PM
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What a sweet lovely little poem
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Susan Ashley
Date: 8/1/2025 7:36:00 PM
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Dear Vanya, evergreens are enchanting and serene as your beautiful poem so elegantly conveys. I adore the touch of white frost against the jade green.. such a poetic visual. Congratulations for your success in Rob’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Vanya Evangeline
Date: 8/14/2025 11:41:00 PM
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Thank you so much, Susan. Green and white really goes well together, don't they?
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Rob Carmack
Date: 7/31/2025 7:14:00 AM
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TY Vanya, a calming and eloquent poem.
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Vanya Evangeline
Date: 8/1/2025 5:09:00 AM
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Thanks for hosting this fun contest and the placement, Rob. Cheers~
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/29/2025 9:04:00 PM
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Pretty as a poem... pretty as a picture, Vanya. ~ Gershon
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Vanya Evangeline
Date: 7/30/2025 10:04:00 AM
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Thank you so much for the kind comment, Gershon.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/29/2025 11:35:00 AM
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Vanya, your lovely, descriptive poem speaks of an especially interesting point about nature. Janice
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Vanya Evangeline
Date: 7/30/2025 8:05:00 AM
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Evergreen trees are some of the most fascinating plant, indeed. At least for me. Thanks for visiting, Janice.
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John Fleming
Date: 7/29/2025 9:37:00 AM
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There is nothing quite like the woods...apart from the moorlands of course. Enjoyable little poem. :) john
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Vanya Evangeline
Date: 7/30/2025 8:02:00 AM
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Izzat so? In a good way, or in a bad way? :p Appreciate the comment though. Thanks so much, John.
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Dr. Vandana Sharma
Date: 7/29/2025 8:36:00 AM
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A peaceful place to be, so evergreen!!
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Vanya Evangeline
Date: 7/30/2025 7:56:00 AM
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Yes, greens are so calming. Thanks for commenting, Dr!

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