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Evergreen

jade firs stood on grass-grown scene 
her slope swathed in verdant sheen
white frost came, a friend so dear
the woods remain, ever green
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 4:06 PM
What a sweet lovely little poem
Ashley Avatar
August 1, 2025 at 7:36 PM
Dear Vanya, evergreens are enchanting and serene as your beautiful poem so elegantly conveys. I adore the touch of white frost against the jade green.. such a poetic visual. Congratulations for your success in Rob’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Evangeline Avatar
August 14, 2025 at 11:41 PM
Thank you so much, Susan. Green and white really goes well together, don't they?
Carmack Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 7:14 AM
TY Vanya, a calming and eloquent poem.
Evangeline Avatar
August 1, 2025 at 5:09 AM
Thanks for hosting this fun contest and the placement, Rob. Cheers~
Wolf Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 9:04 PM
Pretty as a poem... pretty as a picture, Vanya. ~ Gershon
Evangeline Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 10:04 AM
Thank you so much for the kind comment, Gershon.
Canerdy Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 11:35 AM
Vanya, your lovely, descriptive poem speaks of an especially interesting point about nature. Janice
Evangeline Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 8:05 AM
Evergreen trees are some of the most fascinating plant, indeed. At least for me. Thanks for visiting, Janice.
Fleming Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 9:37 AM
There is nothing quite like the woods...apart from the moorlands of course. Enjoyable little poem. :) john
Evangeline Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 8:02 AM
Izzat so? In a good way, or in a bad way? :p Appreciate the comment though. Thanks so much, John.
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