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Ever Yours

Mere repetition With no meaning As though romantically Went on mechanically It seems to be better than A hypocritical canon Wherein love corrodes An atom bomb of lies explodes. We no longer need this. What remains is a mere kiss. Why should the same jail-like cell Continue like hell.

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Christina Bowring

Date: 4/4/2024 7:49:00 AM

Such a profound write with great impact. You can sense the loss, the meaning, in a relationship and the spontaneity when it’s replaced by mechanical actions and feelings with no meaningful depth and sincerity. It just becomes a habit and it takes a lot of strength and bravery to know when it’s time to move on and be released from a ‘ jail like cell’. A very well written, poignant read which many will relate to. Thank you for sharing. Blessings and smiles to you xx

Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/4/2024 9:05:00 AM

Thank You Very Much. May God Bless You!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/29/2024 4:26:00 PM

such a poignant poem of love that has stopped flowing between two hearts. I felt twinges of sadness which means your words were very effective, have a great evening, Sara

Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/4/2024 9:05:00 AM

Thank You Very Much. May God Bless You!