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ever wonder

Was the sun the catalyst For altered pigments Narrowed eyes Genetics Moving through the cycles Of nature’s perfection The moon a silence Rocking us all to sleep

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Date: 7/18/2024 7:33:00 PM
Intriguing questions, John --- much better than 'science's' feeble answers. Ars longa!
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Date: 7/17/2024 4:55:00 PM
I marvel at the questions that arise in your agile mind that are subsequently worked into a poem and keep us entertained and enriched. Good one John...enjoyed.
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John Lawless
Date: 7/18/2024 4:07:00 AM
...it's more like I dance when the muse shoots at my feet....
Date: 7/17/2024 8:51:00 AM
Yes, just this morning as I was contemplating the significance of pi
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John Lawless
Date: 7/18/2024 4:05:00 AM
...It goes best with ice cream
Date: 7/17/2024 6:12:00 AM
This is wonderful, no pun intended, a truly beautiful piece. xomo
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John Lawless
Date: 7/18/2024 4:05:00 AM
I know....ya just had to go there....
Date: 7/17/2024 5:55:00 AM
Love that first verse…intriguing the last. Hugs
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John Lawless
Date: 7/18/2024 4:06:00 AM
glad you enjoyed it Kim

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