Michael J. Falotico Poet Lyric

Ever Really See Me

by Michael J Falotico
                                                                                                                                       
                                                                                                                         
                                               Did you ever really see me..
                                     Or was I just a paper doll for you to keep..
                                       You let me go like a cool morning rain..
                                  You waved goodbye and never really saw the pain..
                                               But did you ever really see me..
                                           Was I just a cup to fill up your tears..
                                        Or just a cloth to wipe away your fears..
                                             My heart was cracked and set free..
                                                But did you ever really see me..
                                                   You never really did at all...

Not based on Today
Just a past relationship.

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James Fraser May 28, 2011 at 6:25 PM I see myself in this piece, but I also see something more. There's a depth to this, that has seeped at times. It's certainly one that I'll revisit at leisure, and maybe I'll see it's past. The title is opening....have a fine Sunday Michael.....:)

Julie Heckman May 15, 2011 at 2:30 PM Loved this poem. I thank you for checking out my piece "Moving"

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 15, 2011 at 9:41 AM So appreciate your comments so profound on the blog scene this early Sunday morning.. why haters insist on bashing me and Constance is so far beyond the reason we are all here ..POETRY as last I remember Michael... thankxx for being a great friend and supporter of my work ... this madness is destroying the site as Constance wrote and such a shame to waste energy on defaming others.. thankxx my White Knight... your Jersey Girl in decorating mode.. see my new blog luv.. need Roseanna too..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 14, 2011 at 7:34 PM Expressions from a past luv and past hurt which broought u to present luv and joy.. nice to put it on paper and read it aloud to free fall from that once emotional feeling my W.K. your J.G. is soooo enjoying your creativity tonight in poetry mode..luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta May 14, 2011 at 5:37 PM Touchy write with thoughts of the past recollected in tranquility, Michael

Wilma Neels May 14, 2011 at 12:18 PM I have to admit I love your introspective writes on past relationships.. To me it's an indication of how far you have come.. Another beauty ;)love WNN

Carolyn Devonshire May 14, 2011 at 10:47 AM Had similar experiences in the past, Michael. Sometime people we come to love never really do see us for who we are. Sadly, this makes me think of my own sister. I love her, but she doesn't "know" me anymore. Beautifully written! Love, Carolyn