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Ever Or At All

they were two lovers in the night staying together till the sunrise passion linked with soft sweet sighs whenever they could steal the time she thought she heard the promise of more he always had one foot out the door it wasn't that loving her was a chore she wasn't what he was looking for she didn't see it like he did she couldn't understand a bit everytime she mentioned it all their time became undid he never asked her to please wait she saw his back going through the gate although the hour was very late she knew this time it was their last date after that last time he didn't call her world crashed in and she bawled and bawled she thought he really has some gawl but nothing was offered--ever or at all

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/24/2010 11:34:00 AM
Well written! Life - isn't it - Liz
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Date: 9/24/2010 10:10:00 AM
nice poem....sad story
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Date: 9/24/2010 9:22:00 AM
Hi J. B. Was his name Joe? lol I love your poem. Love Scarlett
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Date: 9/24/2010 6:59:00 AM
A loving write with a sad ending... powerful write my friend.......Michael
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