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breaths weep of old age through eventide... as fresh rocks stand still Contest of PD: (monoku #7) write what you SEE or FEEL and Your Best Monoku (used in my past Monoku) 2.22.2016

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Date: 4/14/2016 7:45:00 PM
Congrats to you again with this one, Nette.
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Date: 4/14/2016 11:47:00 AM
I read and commented on this lovely winning monoku before, Nette, but my comment has disappeared!! Still, it's a pleasure to be re-reading it! Congratulations on BOTH wins:) hugs // paul
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Date: 4/14/2016 7:49:00 AM
Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/13/2016 8:41:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your Amazing, One line win. Stop by my blog "On The Hunt" and enjoy my happy dance or not!!! LOL... Luv ~LINDA~"
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Date: 3/1/2016 9:27:00 PM
Hi Nette, belated congratulations on you win in the contest. You say so much in so few words. A 7.
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Date: 2/28/2016 6:35:00 AM
Wow! My Warm Congratulations on your win my dear friend, Nette! This is also a great beauty! I'm so sorry for the late reading but it's really a breathtaking piece! I love it! Congrats once again! Btw, I'm just ok here in bkk my dear friend! Hope you do the same and our dear kababayan there! Pls. give my warm regards to everyone! love lots, GL
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Date: 2/27/2016 4:57:00 PM
glad to see this one . Getting around to some of these winner lists so late. BIG congrats, nette.
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Date: 2/25/2016 9:40:00 AM
This is beautiful and creative. Thank you so much for this lovely and useful share....
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Date: 2/22/2016 11:12:00 AM
Strong determination in all circumstances, beautifully done and inspiring also. Congrats my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 2/22/2016 8:04:00 AM
Congratulations nette on your wonderful win in "In one line (monoku #7) write what you SEE or FEEL" contest. You are truly amazing! :) -hans
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Date: 2/22/2016 1:34:00 AM
Excellent monoku. All the best for the contest. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 2/21/2016 10:13:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this wonderful monoku nette.
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Date: 2/21/2016 9:46:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your awesome one line verse (monoku) what you SEE or FEEL win. It's an honor to have you support my contest once again. Stop by and enjoy my blog "Ashamed" if you like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/21/2016 2:14:00 PM
- Great one line, Nette - Good luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/21/2016 1:45:00 PM
Fairway of aging tears set in backdrop of sturdy rocks, very appealing. Happy to note your compliments on my contest win; congratulations on your spots. Will try to peruse soon!
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Date: 2/21/2016 1:32:00 PM
Rocks withstand the age of time as they flow with the tides. Excellent monoku highlighted by deep introspection!
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