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Eventide

breaths weep of old age through eventide... as fresh rocks stand still



Contest of PD: (monoku #7) write what you SEE or FEEL 
and  Your Best Monoku (used in my past Monoku)
 2.22.2016

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Andrea Dietrich

April 14, 2016 at 7:45 PM

Congrats to you again with this one, Nette.

Paul Callus

April 14, 2016 at 11:47 AM

I read and commented on this lovely winning monoku before, Nette, but my comment has disappeared!! Still, it's a pleasure to be re-reading it! Congratulations on BOTH wins:) hugs // paul

Bl Devnath

April 14, 2016 at 7:49 AM

Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A

April 13, 2016 at 8:41 PM

Nette, Congratulations on your Amazing, One line win. Stop by my blog "On The Hunt" and enjoy my happy dance or not!!! LOL... Luv ~LINDA~"

Vladislav Raven

March 1, 2016 at 9:27 PM

Hi Nette, belated congratulations on you win in the contest. You say so much in so few words. A 7.

Len Gasun

February 28, 2016 at 6:35 AM

Wow! My Warm Congratulations on your win my dear friend, Nette! This is also a great beauty! I'm so sorry for the late reading but it's really a breathtaking piece! I love it! Congrats once again! Btw, I'm just ok here in bkk my dear friend! Hope you do the same and our dear kababayan there! Pls. give my warm regards to everyone! love lots, GL

Andrea Dietrich

February 27, 2016 at 4:57 PM

glad to see this one . Getting around to some of these winner lists so late. BIG congrats, nette.

Funom Makama

February 25, 2016 at 9:40 AM

This is beautiful and creative. Thank you so much for this lovely and useful share....

Bl Devnath

February 22, 2016 at 11:12 AM

Strong determination in all circumstances, beautifully done and inspiring also. Congrats my lovely friend, bl

Hansteven Selfa

February 22, 2016 at 8:04 AM

Congratulations nette on your wonderful win in "In one line (monoku #7) write what you SEE or FEEL" contest. You are truly amazing! :) -hans

Ravi Sathasivam

February 22, 2016 at 1:34 AM

Excellent monoku. All the best for the contest. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

February 21, 2016 at 10:13 PM

Congrats on ur awesome win with this wonderful monoku nette.

Poet Destroyer A

February 21, 2016 at 9:46 PM

Nette, Congratulations on your awesome one line verse (monoku) what you SEE or FEEL win. It's an honor to have you support my contest once again. Stop by and enjoy my blog "Ashamed" if you like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 21, 2016 at 2:14 PM

- Great one line, Nette - Good luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Noel Onat

February 21, 2016 at 1:45 PM

Fairway of aging tears set in backdrop of sturdy rocks, very appealing. Happy to note your compliments on my contest win; congratulations on your spots. Will try to peruse soon!

Lyva Marty

February 21, 2016 at 1:32 PM

Rocks withstand the age of time as they flow with the tides. Excellent monoku highlighted by deep introspection!

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