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Eventide

I ask of the night why it slips into my bedroom and extinguishes Earth's light, He replied softly "I'm a jealous lover and my shade of evening lies down beside you, as we bid the augustness of the sun adieu." I laugh and weep at the same time, as I'm in love with the four season's soirees he enchants my heart with. Many years ago, walking slowly hand in hand with my lifeguard lover on the sands of Fire Island, I thought love's charms would last, his fire with starlight, jewels of moonlight, and kisses- with summer's wane he faded into September's wooing embrace. Yet glorious eventide was always there, and, as he filled my eyes with the swallow's flight, he whispered breathlessly, "You are mine to keep."

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/29/2023 8:26:00 AM

Congratulations on being on the "100 Best New Poems" list for Soup... Wonderful write/ending. Have a great/wonderful day/2024 writing away.................

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/13/2023 5:05:00 PM

Dearest Regina, my inspiring friend, your exquisite Eventide takes my breath away. Tender poetic expression swaddles my imagination in the soft fleece of your verse as my heart nestles in its beauty. Your golden pen shines with the glory of your artistry. Congratulations for your excellent win in Ink Empress's contest. Warmest wishes, sweet poetess.. ~Susan

Regina Elliott
Date: 12/14/2023 11:45:00 AM

Dear Sweet Susan, my deepest gratitude my lovely poetry friend. You are so very kind and thoughtful coming by with your supportive congratulations. And my Congratulations to you, for your winning placement in the contest with a fine and superior entry. A bright and warm, festive Christmas to you & your family. All the best of the season to you, dearest poetess.

Ink Empress

Date: 12/13/2023 8:09:00 AM

Dear regina, this poem resonates with me so deeply. And I absolutely love the creative and imaginative storytelling you’ve done here in soft eloquence. Brilliant write that left me captivated from the very first line. It is my absolute pleasure to place this as the second place winner in my contest. Congratulations on your well deserved win

Regina Elliott
Date: 12/13/2023 11:40:00 AM

My deepest gratitude, Ink Empress. I feel deeply honored to have placed in your contest. I hope you have a joyous and healthy holiday season. All the best to you

Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/7/2023 7:32:00 PM

I afgree with the other comments, Theres a softness about it.. Thank you for creating beauty Pangie xxxx

Regina Elliott
Date: 12/8/2023 1:39:00 PM

Thank you, dear Pangie. I'm so happy you like this poem. xxxxx

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/7/2023 5:29:00 PM

Regina, Such a moving and expressive piece, brimming with nuanced shades of love, and hunger! You have a way with words that is both gentle and meaningful. Thanks for commenting on my poem and Congrats on your well-earned contest win.

Regina Elliott
Date: 12/8/2023 1:38:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Sotto Poet, you're kind and thoughtful. Have a creative and inspiring weekend. All the best to you. ~

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/7/2023 3:50:00 PM

your poem is soft and delicate, Regina. Reminds me of my first love, a love that also faded into September's wooing embrace. Thanks for sparking that memory. This poem is delightful. Have to fave it...enjoy your evening, Sara

Regina Elliott
Date: 12/8/2023 1:35:00 PM

You're so generous and kind, Sara, my deepest thank you. I hope you and Bill are having a grand December evening. Many warm Christmas wishes to you both. ~

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/7/2023 7:42:00 AM

Oh my, this is such a heartfelt and evocative write with delicate hues of love, longing yet eternity, all combined in one! Your words are so soft in their unique and profound flow.. "with summer's wane he faded into September's wooing embrace", "glorious eventide was always there," And that ending... Sooo beautiful..

Regina Elliott
Date: 12/7/2023 1:45:00 PM

My deep gratitude, Hiya. Your comment on my poem is so kind and thoughtful. Thank you so much for reading it and expressing positivity. Warmest wishes to you.