Evening's Face

 
blue sky, dotted with white clouds sun, in his last lap of race slanting rays gleam in gold sheen their beauty to evening they bestow
March .4. 2022 syllables- 7/7/7/9 Lind 30 nr Poetry Contest Sponsor- Chantelle Anne Cooke
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Proxenos Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 10:10 PM
Your talent is clearly visible in whatever you choose to write about Valsa. The night gives the stars their bright stark beauty due to the lusterous glow of the sun's daily visits of 'slanting rays that gleam in gold sheen' beautifully penned Valsa. Hugs and blessings Jennifer. .
Brul Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 7:08 AM
There is always something fresh in your poem dear Valsa. I am already addicted to read more.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 4, 2022 at 1:07 PM
Sun in his last lap of race…like that visual!
Calasibetta Avatar
March 4, 2022 at 4:37 AM
So beautiful! Your imagery enchanting~taking us through a beautiful day! Good Luck in the contest. :)Paulette
Pandit Avatar
March 4, 2022 at 4:31 AM
Enjoyed the beautiful evening you painted, Valsa.
Buhagiar Avatar
March 4, 2022 at 12:50 AM
Lovely short poem. Victor
Seeker Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 10:58 PM
I see this style is gaining popularity! Beautifully written, Valsa
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