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Evening's Face

blue sky, dotted with white clouds sun, in his last lap of race slanting rays gleam in gold sheen their beauty to evening they bestow
March .4. 2022 syllables- 7/7/7/9 Lind 30 nr Poetry Contest Sponsor- Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 3/6/2022 10:10:00 PM
Your talent is clearly visible in whatever you choose to write about Valsa. The night gives the stars their bright stark beauty due to the lusterous glow of the sun's daily visits of 'slanting rays that gleam in gold sheen' beautifully penned Valsa. Hugs and blessings Jennifer. .
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Date: 3/6/2022 7:08:00 AM
There is always something fresh in your poem dear Valsa. I am already addicted to read more.
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Date: 3/4/2022 1:07:00 PM
Sun in his last lap of race…like that visual!
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Date: 3/4/2022 4:37:00 AM
So beautiful! Your imagery enchanting~taking us through a beautiful day! Good Luck in the contest. :)Paulette
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Date: 3/4/2022 4:31:00 AM
Enjoyed the beautiful evening you painted, Valsa.
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Date: 3/4/2022 12:50:00 AM
Lovely short poem. Victor
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Date: 3/3/2022 10:58:00 PM
I see this style is gaining popularity! Beautifully written, Valsa
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