Evening Wind

Zwischen den Zweigen
Nur Säuseln des Abendwinds
Im fahlen Mondschein


Between the branches
Only murmur of the evening wind
In the pale moonlight


Entre las ramas
Sólo murmullo del viento de la tarde
En luz pálida de luna

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/20/2011 11:08:00 AM
Dreamy and tranquil Gert, lovely images from your words....:)
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Date: 1/9/2011 3:07:00 PM
well, I can' t believe I never saw this one before. I love the transition between lines one and two. And all together, one beautiful moonlight portrait. thanks for seeing my poems this weekend, Gert. LUv ,Andrea
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Date: 1/9/2011 8:48:00 AM
Very expressive work..The scene is very clear..I enjoyed reading your work this Sunday morn...Your review of my work this Sunday filled my heart with joy..Sara
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Date: 1/8/2011 9:17:00 AM
Romantic and passionate work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Your review of my work brought light into my gray day..Sara
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Date: 1/6/2011 4:40:00 AM
it's my rosetta stone friend. john
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Date: 1/1/2011 5:34:00 PM
Gert, you are sooo good at these Haikus! Breathtaking! Every one! Hope you're feeling a little better today! Stay warm! Happy New Year with blessings, peace and joy! Always, Audrey
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Date: 1/1/2011 8:16:00 AM
You allow us to see it, hear it and feel it, Gert. You can't ask for more than that in great poetry! Happy New Year, dear friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/31/2010 2:00:00 PM
In any language you are good; how are you, my friend? Thanks for the assurance that you will always write inspired poetry ... I like the way you touch words, Gert, and turn them into gold.
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Date: 12/31/2010 12:52:00 PM
thankxxx Gert and appreciate the lovely sentiments u left to begin my new year ..my friend... please continue to thrill us all with your beautiful words ... with luv..HNY
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Date: 12/30/2010 6:27:00 PM
Beautiful gert,, love the image,, have a nice one,..p.d.
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Date: 12/30/2010 9:32:00 AM
Breathtaking words my friend and such a lovely view to enhance the poem with great imagery of that pale moonlight... enjoyed this wonderful write Gert and wishing u a very Happy New Year with luv..
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Date: 12/28/2010 1:10:00 PM
enjoyed reading your work today!! I have been tired and busy with holidays and family problems. Will be in and out of soup until my son goes back to school in january. He keeps me busy.
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Date: 12/28/2010 9:11:00 AM
This beautiful haiku could very well be about the evening wind here, Gert! How are you doing? I hope Christmas was wonderful for you :) Wishing you all the best in 2011 :) hugs nikko :)
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Date: 12/27/2010 5:24:00 AM
Lovely haiku, truly I look forward to reading more of your work Crystal~x
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Date: 12/26/2010 10:42:00 AM
Wonderful Gert, the coldness is the only silent wind around here. Truly enjoyed your wonderful write,, have a wonderful day,..p.d.
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Date: 12/26/2010 8:20:00 AM
Nice pen picture of the present day weather, Gert
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Date: 12/26/2010 8:10:00 AM
Stunning haiku Gert ;-) thank you for the e card as well.. Hope your day is a good one
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