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Evening Walk

Aimless mind slap bang Coated out to spring Dressed up, bear body hiding Set out the old road along The bus or the tram Unless may be the train To right or the left no plan Time and space came The side where I belonged to The tram was on way from left to Undecided space came think to Opened the door just get into Passengers were on seats Passersby were in streets Seemed to be direct targets Looking at their end points Planned and minded among Blank and aimless I am Getting down one by one One and only in I am Reverse way to the direction Same as the tram to go again Waiting for till times come End or the beginning no aim Passengers were on seats Passersby were in streets Driver is on the seat I am also on my seat All they know their aim I don’t have a plan Left or the right same Just for the pass time Udaya R. Tennakoon

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Date: 2/5/2013 5:18:00 PM
i found this very enjoyable and a splendid write great job on this gem!
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Udaya R. Tennakoon
Date: 2/6/2013 2:29:00 AM
thanks Mitchell. Best wishes to you too

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