Evening Slumbers

evening slumbers -
 muted by the falling snow,
 dusted in quietude,
 trees slip peacefully into
 the night, blanketed by snow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 3:51 PM
was this in a contest. Just came back to tell you again how much I like it!
May Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 4:59 PM
Thank you Andrea...no it wasn't for a contest, but I hope to find one to enter it in!
Sage Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 11:21 AM
excellent tanka there Joseph
Horsman Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 10:08 AM
A painting in a tanka,,love this Joseph.
Sage Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 7:03 PM
excellent tanka there Joseph...
Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 9:03 PM
wow, the language of this is pure magic!!
Callus Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 5:14 PM
What a beautiful picture and serene sensation you create, Joseph! Well done! // paul
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January 19, 2016 at 10:14 PM
Awesome Tanka......... Love LINDA
Allison Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 7:07 PM
delightful imagery Jospeh:-) hugs Jan xx7
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