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Evening Sky

Blue, violet, and magenta masterpiece Brushed with mounds like white cotton Rainbows streaming down sunbeams Intertwining amongst pillows of light Drifting, spiraling downward Covering the earth in elegance Gracing many a mountains face Illuminating sand and stones Creating paintings upon the soul Copyright © 2009 Lena “Lolita” Townsend

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David Smalling

Date: 6/5/2009 6:42:00 AM

This is an awesome picture. I have seen sunset like these in Negril, Jamaica. I did not think I could capture in words and wished always I was a painter ... you are the artist extraordinaire, and your canvas is my mind's eye. Love it.

Bianca Reyes

Date: 5/31/2009 6:54:00 PM

harmonious imagery, a beautiful masterpiece. sweetly said. ~Andrea Bianca

Brandy Megens

Date: 5/25/2009 5:55:00 PM

soothing and sweetly painted my soul rests at ease nicely written nice to meet you

Cesar Cantu

Date: 5/24/2009 7:18:00 PM

Oh sunset, sunrise, isn't the middle-ground time zone the best? Jojojo and you really know how to pay tribute to it...magnificent =) thanks for the experience yei!!!

Brian Strand

Date: 5/20/2009 12:20:00 AM

Lovely work Lolita.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

John Loving Iii

Date: 5/19/2009 2:52:00 PM

painting the soul? ok i can get this concept. John H Loving III

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/19/2009 6:57:00 AM

Wow! You are not kidding with your last line, for that is exactly what you have done! Incredible beauty! Love, Shar