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Evening Show

Theatrical rays,
Dance on a pearl stage of clouds:
A blazing sunset.

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James Fraser

February 5, 2010 at 8:04 AM

What an image this paints Raul, ever thought of asking a local artist to put your words down on canvas? >> just wonderful >> James

Marcus Crane

February 3, 2010 at 4:58 PM

i only can only confirm what everyone else have said here .. beautiful image has been created ..very nice imagery . marco

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 30, 2010 at 8:04 PM

A beautiful and visual scene u have captured with your words of Haiku... your title is superb for the content of your poem.. so enjoyed.. new favorite.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Charmaine Chircop

January 25, 2010 at 7:01 PM

Raul,beautiful painting you've created here,,indeed beautiful,...Charma

Marty Owens

January 21, 2010 at 7:02 PM

Beautiful description...love it...Marty

Debbie Guzzi

January 21, 2010 at 4:06 PM

Dern hard to do with no verbs aye? Light & Love

Tim Ryerson

January 20, 2010 at 3:15 AM

Another beauty from the 'Haiku-head-honcho', Raul...Keep 'um coming! - Tim

January 18, 2010 at 7:51 PM

Love the imagery in the second line seen through the eyes of a artist. Well done. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind comment. Karen