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Evening Show

Theatrical rays, Dance on a pearl stage of clouds: A blazing sunset.

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James Fraser

Date: 2/5/2010 8:04:00 AM

What an image this paints Raul, ever thought of asking a local artist to put your words down on canvas? >> just wonderful >> James

Marcus Crane

Date: 2/3/2010 4:58:00 PM

i only can only confirm what everyone else have said here .. beautiful image has been created ..very nice imagery . marco

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/30/2010 8:04:00 PM

A beautiful and visual scene u have captured with your words of Haiku... your title is superb for the content of your poem.. so enjoyed.. new favorite.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/25/2010 7:01:00 PM

Raul,beautiful painting you've created here,,indeed beautiful,...Charma

Marty Owens

Date: 1/21/2010 7:02:00 PM

Beautiful description...love it...Marty

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/21/2010 4:06:00 PM

Dern hard to do with no verbs aye? Light & Love

Tim Ryerson

Date: 1/20/2010 3:15:00 AM

Another beauty from the 'Haiku-head-honcho', Raul...Keep 'um coming! - Tim

Date: 1/18/2010 7:51:00 PM

Love the imagery in the second line seen through the eyes of a artist. Well done. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind comment. Karen

Margaret Foster

Date: 1/18/2010 3:22:00 PM

beautiful imagery in this haiku. a pleasure to read. thanks for commenting on my effort....Margaret

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/18/2010 2:18:00 PM

Wow!! Breath taking images~ You have outdone yourself, this is amazing!

Jared Pickett

Date: 1/18/2010 1:35:00 PM

Theatrical rays...... Awesome way to start this Haiku.... Always amazing my friend......:JP]