Teddy Kimathi Poet Free verse

Evening Rains

Sunset's hue
coats the pool's skin with fiery glitter,
as raindrops ceaselessly drum everywhere my eyes can see.
Scent of spring is in the air,
as ripples blend on the pool's skin.
Raindrops will keep on playing the rhythmic
drumming, until when the 
skies open once again.


Date Written: 8/11/2016

Date Judged: 8/15/2016

Previous Contest Name: Rain

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Sunita U.D Palawon August 16, 2016 at 12:22 PM Congrats on your placing with this sweet and short one. :) Sunita Teddy Kimathi August 17, 2016 at 6:14 AM Thank you so much for your applause, Sunita!! *^_^*

Sara Chansarkar August 16, 2016 at 10:57 AM This is awesome imagery Teddy!Congrats on your win! Teddy Kimathi August 17, 2016 at 6:11 AM Thank you so much Sandra!! *^_^* I really appreciate it!! :-)

Sandra Haight August 15, 2016 at 9:55 PM Lovely imagery in your 'rain' poem, Teddy. Congrats on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra Teddy Kimathi August 17, 2016 at 6:10 AM Greetings Sandra. Thank you for enjoying my piece, and applauding it!! *^_^*

Janis Medders Tobechi August 15, 2016 at 7:42 PM Congratulations on your win... Teddy Kimathi August 17, 2016 at 6:07 AM Thank you so much for your applause, Janis!! *^_^*

Eve Roper August 15, 2016 at 5:51 PM Congratulations on your win, Teddy, thank you for entering my contest ! Hug Eve Teddy Kimathi August 17, 2016 at 5:59 AM You are always welcome, Eve! ;-) Thank you so much for your applause!! *^_^*

Beautiful Scars August 15, 2016 at 4:58 PM Teddy, wonderful flow and imagery...congrats on your placement in the Rain contest :)-luloo Teddy Kimathi August 17, 2016 at 4:13 AM Thank you so much Laura, for your applause and enjoying my piece!! *^_^* I really appreciate it!! ;-)

Laura Leiser August 11, 2016 at 10:01 PM I heard the drumming rain in your wonderful poem, Teddy. Very nice! GL in the contest:) Teddy Kimathi August 17, 2016 at 3:21 AM Thank you so much for enjoying my piece, Laura!! *^_^*