Mystic Rose Rose Poet Rhyme

Evening Magic

(A COLLABORATION WITH ROBERT LIGUORI ) 

When the sun goes down on this hillbilly town 
I will meet you there where the stars never frown 
Down in the valley where the trees breathe easy 
you and I will walk the sea slow, then easy-peasy   
and as your arm encircles me I will whisper poetry

Roses in full bloom in a  magical night of romance   
 we together as one two tender petals hand in hand   
rolling towards the wispy winds like a lovers dance ;     
Then with precision we will write in the sultry sand       
the truthful words of our destined, happenchance  

When the whispering is through, I'll belong to you
As the paint on a palomino foal is golden new
Our love together will glisten true
And then, getting in my rinky-dink truck
We'll ride back to town, while the sun comes up. 


September 18, 2021 
Thankyou Robert for joining me in this beautiful writing venture.

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Sally Eslinger September 29, 2021 at 2:19 PM Mystic Rose and Robert. A Bravo! for this splendid poem resulting from your collaboration. The feelings expressed musically matched the rhyming flow. The chosen words and phrases captured me into the paired characters & their feelings growing. I could feel, too, the happy stars, the warm breath of whispers & the sand, feel the worn vinyl truck seats! XOX

Delice Arleen Skelly September 22, 2021 at 1:46 AM Very nicely done both of you...Delice

Vijay Pandit September 19, 2021 at 5:23 AM Lovely voice of two hearts and minds. Kudos to you both--Robert and Vienna.

Victor Buhagiar September 19, 2021 at 2:42 AM Great collaboration. Hugs.

Robert James Liguori September 18, 2021 at 6:58 PM Thank you Mystic Rose for the collaboration. It was very nice working with you on this poetry. You are very gifted.

Quoth Theraven September 18, 2021 at 4:58 PM Mystic Rose Rose/Robert Liguori, So nice this poem's 'Evening Magic' call, raised in best fervor of two lover's voices. Quite a ride you two took us on in this collaboration. A romantic matinee well worth the price of admission. -Richard Mystic Rose Rose September 18, 2021 at 5:55 PM Thankyou Richard for stopping by, It was so much fun creating with a partner, as poets we are so solitary, but once in a while its nice to share minds.

Alexis Y. September 18, 2021 at 2:53 PM Wow! Mystic, you and Robert penned a well-written collaboration. I can't tell who wrote what. It was such a magical and romantic evening. Well done to you both. Have a great day and weekend;-)Alexis Mystic Rose Rose September 18, 2021 at 4:19 PM Thank you Alexis, for taking the time to read it, :)