Evening Lamp Light's View

evening lamp light's view 
                                   on the edge of sea's water 
                                      says see you again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Onclaud Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 3:34 PM
your juxtaposition is really an 'aha' moment, bl... you light this 'ku up.. huggs
Andresen Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 2:12 PM
- Always good to see you - Let your lamps shine forever - A wonderful haiku (7), my friend Bl ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 3:17 PM
Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your good wishes to me with a wonderful comment. Loved always,bl
Gulley Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 11:35 AM
A lovely emotional touch here, Devanth. A very nice written Haiku.....Sharon
Devnath  Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 3:15 PM
Thanks my lovely poetess friend for your visit and a beautiful comment. Loved always,bl
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