Evening Fair

EVENING FAIR (sing to Scarborough Fair)

Crust of bread and strawberries red
Cheese and wine will go to your head
And when you dance    the room becomes magic
Step and whirl at Blithe County Fair

Warm the night with bright crescent Moon
Fiddles three    an old Spanish tune
Sweet Greta Lee has captured my fancy
Step and whirl at Blithe County Fair

Youth and Eros    moment of bliss
Rose glow her cheeks    I offer a kiss
Though so demure    she yields to temptation
Found my true love at Blithe County Fair

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/20/2014 5:01:00 PM
And may i say a blithe telling of that time Daver i shall have to visit a fair..!
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Date: 4/15/2012 5:44:00 AM
I spotted this great write of yours which I fav'd a year ago this April, April 12th to be exact dear poet...ooooo how happy I am that I did Dave ! I am so pleased that I became fellows with ya sir ! Again, have a blessed day ! Much love, james
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Date: 4/27/2010 4:50:00 PM
Congratulations, i am happy 4 U, this is a nice one, sweet first love, is this the one you won 4th place, take care,,p.d.
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Date: 4/22/2010 7:57:00 AM
Shame on me for not spotting this one, are you still with your first love. Still it is a very sweet write.
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Date: 4/17/2010 2:33:00 PM
My congratulations, Daver, on your well deserved win in Carolyn's Contest!! Enjoy your win and hope you're having a great weekend! Also, thank you for always reading and leaving your kind comments on my poems. Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 4/17/2010 2:26:00 AM
Very nice encounter- Congrats on the win Daver
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Date: 4/16/2010 10:18:00 PM
I'm so glad this one placed, it was one of my favorites, Daver! LUv, andrea
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Date: 4/16/2010 7:13:00 PM
Marvelous lyrics! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 4/16/2010 6:27:00 PM
Congratulations Daver on your fourth place in Carolyn's contest. A worthy poem. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/16/2010 4:33:00 PM
Congrats Daver on your winning poem in Carolyn's contest ... great lyrics for a great win with this special poem ..enjoy and let me say I luved your comment on poet destroyer slam poetry to billy the kidster.. believe me Daver...U are not old!!! luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/16/2010 2:36:00 PM
This was a delightful visit to the fair, Daver, and it flowed perfectly with the melody. I would expect nothing less from a concert violinist! Congratulations on your success in my contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/15/2010 3:05:00 PM
Dear Daver, this time it seems correct. I’ll look forward to your letter tomorrow. Love, Amy.
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Date: 4/15/2010 2:35:00 PM
Dear Daver, you made a mistake. You used an “l” instead of an “i”. The email is riisna@yahoo.ca Please try to send it again. I would love to hear from you in email because I have so little time for Poetry Soup. Love, Amy.
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Date: 4/13/2010 3:53:00 PM
cute poem, brings back memories of bygone days.
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Date: 4/12/2010 3:31:00 PM
did'nt know the tune but it was singable. john
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Date: 4/12/2010 1:18:00 PM
Daver, I think I like yours the best of all. It's short, it's romantic and I can actually sing to this one because I remember its tune!! Did you never see Apocolypto, directed by Mel Gisbon. It's about the end of the Mayans, and Jaguar Paw is the main character. YOu should rent it. It's awesome. Glad you enjoyed my Charlie fish limerick. Luv, andrea
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Date: 4/12/2010 12:00:00 PM
Enjoyed reading today Daver. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/12/2010 9:20:00 AM
Dear Daver, Thank you for your kind comment about my poem. I just finished reading EVENING FAIR, and really enjoyed your excellent poem about the fair. I hope to read some more on another day. Best regards, Amy.
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Date: 4/12/2010 7:43:00 AM
Daver...excelent write here Sir ! I've been to several county fairs in my youth and it was always a favorite piece of the county pie, to find the girl with the prettiest eyes ! This goes to my favs ! TY james
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Date: 4/11/2010 7:57:00 AM
Beautiful rendition Daver of one of their greatest songs ...good luck in Carolyn's contest.... already a winner with your excellent words ..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/11/2010 7:40:00 AM
One of my favorite songs...and now your poem is one of my favorites too !! Great work, Daver!! Love it!!
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Date: 4/11/2010 7:38:00 AM
I love strawberries,they are my favourite fruit,Cheese and Wine,delcious, and that dancing,Ow let us get our dancing shoes..lovely lovely poem..Id love to be at the County Fair..It seems it was your lucky day:),,lovely poem indeed..Charma
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Date: 4/11/2010 7:11:00 AM
A nice rhyme or lyric poem, thank you for sharing. Caryl
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Date: 4/11/2010 6:06:00 AM
A fine rhyming . I rad it aloud I got the effect.
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Date: 4/11/2010 6:04:00 AM
Beauty and grace flow from your pen...Keep the magic mounting on wings of eagles to grace our eyes..Sara
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